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Little Surprises, AU

Postby Axel_Avalon » Sun May 08, 2005 9:51 pm

Ok so this is my new story. Hopefully you guys will like it. Here goes.





Title: Little Surprises, AU
Disclaimer: We all know the sick twisted moronic genius who owns them, I am merely trying to soothe the wounds he so viciously inflicted. I don’t own the song either.
Pairing: W/T
Rating: PG (for now)
Spoilers: None, completely AU
Summary: Attempting to make a point to herself, Willow ends up with more than she bargained for.
Note: AMY LEE IS GOD!!! The song is called You.



This has got to be the longest day of my entire life. Tara thought to her self as she sat at her desk at Nelson Imagery and Graphics in San Francisco. It’s not that she didn’t like her job, today was just a boring day. All her projects for the next month were finished and on her boss’ desk. Tara was in the middle of flinging rubber-bands into a cup across her office when her cell phone began to vibrate. She looked at the name that showed on the little screen and smiled.

“Hey, what’s up?” she spoke into the phone.
“Oh nothing just thought I’d call.” a soft voice came through the connection.
“What are you doing home this time of day?” Tara teased lightly.
“I had a doctor’s appointment.”
“Are you ok? You sound a little upset.”
“I uh, the doctor says that I’m…”
“What it is?” ‘Uh oh’
“I’m pregnant.”
”OH. MY. GOD. That’s wonderful, wait, you’re upset. Is everything ok? Is it the baby?”
“No Tare, the baby’s fine. And before you ask, I’m fine.”
“Then what’s with the sad voice. Have you told Trey yet?”
”Uh yeah…”
“What did he say?”
“He left, he said he wasn’t ready to be a father and I agreed. So he packed his stuff and left.”
“Oh sweetie I’m so sorry, I’m sure he was just a little overwhelmed” 'That slimy little bastard’
“I don’t think so and I’m actually kind of ok with it. I mean of course it sucks that I won’t see him at all anymore but we were already ready to move on from each other. And I really don’t think that he would be that good of a father because, let’s face it, even Xander is more responsible than Trey. But, I still don’t think I can raise a child. I mean, I don’t know what a baby would want or how to take care of one or how to hold one or…”
“Willow!”
“Yeah,”
“Deep breaths, okay, breathe before you pass out.”
“Ok,”
“I’ll be there as soon as I can. I think the next plane to New York leaves at 10 tonight, so I ought to be there by 6:30…”
“Tara I can’t ask you to fly out here. I mean what about your job and Michelle…”
“I’ll be there by 6:30 ok?”
“Thanks”
“No problem Will.”


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I should come back later. She could be sleeping and then I would just be disturbing. This is stupid I should just go find a hotel and come back later. But what if she woke up early so she wouldn’t miss me? If I wait until later she might get nervous and think something bad happened. I’m sure pregnant women and stress aren’t a good combination. This is retarded I should just go ring the doorbell.’

Tara exited the rental car she had picked up at the airport, grabbed her bag from the trunk, and approached the large two-story house. ‘This house is too big for her to stay in by herself.’ She knocked softly on the door only to have it opened immediately by a very exhausted looking redhead.

They stood looking at each other for a long minute. Tara looked at her best friend, barely controlling the feelings she had held in since high school. She didn’t think it was possible, but it seemed that Willow had gotten even more beautiful in the six months since her last visit.

Willow took a shuddering breath as see looked into the crystalline blue eyes that had always felt like home. A small smile tugged at the corner of her mouth as her eyes watered from the pure joy and relief seeing Tara had caused in her. She felt her lower lip began to tremble as the blonde stepped through the door. The door closed with a resounding click and Willow felt two days worth of suppressed tears start to roll down her face.

“Willow,” Tara opened her arms and took a step towards the redhead. Willow gladly sank into the warm embrace desperately wrapping her arms around Tara’s neck. “Willow, sweetie, it’s ok.”

Willow clung to Tara for a few minutes until her tears subsided. She pulled back and looked at Tara with a small smile. “I’ve missed you,” she admitted biting her lip and blushing lightly.

Tara chuckled softly. “I’ve missed you too Will.” She reached forward and brushed away the rest of Willow’s tears.

Willow ducked her head as a huge smile lit up her face. “It’s still early you can go get some sleep if you want. I made up all the extra rooms so that you could pick when you got here. And I bought all those freaky smelling candles you like. Um the room up by the bathroom is the largest so you’d probably want to…” She stopped short when she heard soft giggling coming from Tara.

“You have know no idea how much I have missed that.” she stepped forward and kissed Willow’s forehead. She took the redhead’s hand and led her through to the living room. “And I can rest later.” Tara sat on the large red leather sofa and pulled Willow down against her.

Willow settled against her laying her head on Tara’s chest. She snuggled into her friend and sighed. She yawned and tried to keep her eyes open. She had been up since 5 that morning, her nervous energy not allowing her to sleep. A soft sigh escaped her lips as she snuggled closer to her best friend.

“Tara, I want to hear you sing.”

“Sure Will, what do you want to hear?”

“It doesn’t matter, just sing.”

Tara smiled at the redhead as she softly began to sing.
“The words have been drained from this pencil
Sweet words that I want to give you
And I can’t sleep
I need to tell you, goodnight
When we’re together I feel perfect
When I’m pulled away from you
I fall apart
All you say is sacred to me
Your eyes are so blue
I can’t look away
As we lay in the stillness”


Willow’s eyes slid shut as she listened to Tara sing. The words weaving themselves into her dreams as she fell asleep.


TBC…


There it is. Tell me what you think.
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    Re: Little Surprises, AU

    Postby SpinCycle » Sun May 08, 2005 10:54 pm

    Great start. I like the idea of them being friends (but not yet girlfriends) when Willow becomes pregnant. It gives a different set of rules to their ultimately getting together. I love how you write Willow, the part where she made up all the beds so Tara could pick is so her. And what's the song? The lyrics are very pretty.

    I only wonder what complications will arise with Michelle. Who I'm guessing is Tara's girlfriend, but hoping is Tara's cat.

    Can't wait for more.
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    Re: Little Surprises, AU

    Postby GayNow » Sun May 08, 2005 10:55 pm

    I think you're off to a nice start here, Axel. It should be interesting to see where you take the story.

    This was just wonderful:
    Willow took a shuddering breath as see looked into the crystalline blue eyes that had always felt like home.

    I read that and got all tingly. Nicely put.

    Looking forward to an update.

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    Re: Little Surprises, AU

    Postby sam » Mon May 09, 2005 8:13 am

    Oh, I just love this so far, it's sounds cute and Willow's pregnant :x . and oh yes, I definitely agree with you about Amy Lee :-D . Love sam xx
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    Re: Little Surprises, AU

    Postby caz » Mon May 09, 2005 11:40 am

    This is great! Starting off as best friends is definitely the way to go. Willow being pregnant is a hoot, she babbles and panics under normal cicumstances - I can't wait to see what happens when the baby starts to move!

    I can't wait for the next chapter.

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    Re: Little Surprises, AU

    Postby WT214 » Mon May 09, 2005 12:56 pm

    Totally loving how you're starting this. :bow Can't wait till the next update.
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    Re: Little Surprises, AU

    Postby the hero factor » Mon May 09, 2005 4:59 pm

    Good start. I like the premise, with them being best friends first. I do worry about this 'Michelle' person, though. Unless if it's like SpinCycle said, and Michelle is Tara's cat, in which case, that's okay.

    Can't wait to read more, Axel_Avalon.
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    Re: Little Surprises, AU

    Postby Hidden In You1023 » Mon May 09, 2005 5:43 pm

    aww...it's a great start. I like it so far...update soon please!
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    Re: Little Surprises, AU

    Postby cperrins78 » Mon May 09, 2005 6:43 pm

    Yes this is an awesome story. I've been thinking about how cool it would be to have a story with this similar setup. I always wanted to see Willow & Tara start out as friends and have one of them involved with someone else. I can't wait to see what direction you take this story in. Very excited here and can't wait for an update!!!! :applause
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    Re: Little Surprises, AU

    Postby AlysonGoddess » Mon May 09, 2005 7:10 pm

    Absolutely beautiful!!!!!!!! Cant wait for an update :applause ..and update soon please!!!

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    Re: Little Surprises, AU

    Postby blue eyed girl » Mon May 09, 2005 7:30 pm

    This is a great start. I like the idea of them being friends first and having Willow be pregnant. I can see how they could end up together with Tara helping her with the pregnancy. Can't wait to see where you take this. Update soon.
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    Re: Little Surprises, AU

    Postby willow the badass witch » Mon May 09, 2005 8:16 pm

    Interesting... very interesting indeed. I'm more than a bit curious how it's all gonna come together seeing that W/T starts as bestfriends instead of total strangers.

    ... left me blinking stupidly at my monitor and looking for page 2 of the thread... before realizing that that was it. Needless to say... more please?

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    Re: Little Surprises, AU

    Postby tarawhipped » Tue May 10, 2005 6:20 pm

    Little Surprises is right, Axel! I'd give you grief for starting another fic when you have two others going, but I won't for two reasons. One, that would be the height of hypocrisy coming from me. :-D Two, I like all of your stories, especially cause they're all so different. Like everyone else, I really love the set up here. I can easily picture Tara as the type of friend who would drop everything and hop on a plane for a friend in need, especially since she's apparently had feelings for Willow since high school. I hope this Trey jerk is out of the picture and doesn't try to worm his way back into Willow's heart, but who's this Michelle chick? I won't worry too much, since she clearly is less important to Tara than Willow...just update soon, okay? Update EVERYTHING!!!

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    Little Surprises, AU Part 2

    Postby Axel_Avalon » Tue May 10, 2005 8:36 pm

    Title: Little Surprises, AU Part 2
    Disclaimer: We all know the sick twisted moronic genius who owns them, I am merely trying to soothe the wounds he so viciously inflicted. I don’t own the song either.
    Pairing: W/T
    Rating: PG (for now)
    Spoilers: None, completely AU
    Summary: Attempting to make a point to herself, Willow ends up with more than she bargained for.


    **************************************

    “By the end of the first trimester, your baby will weigh approximately 1 ounce, and be about 3 inches in length and signs of the baby's sex are beginning to appear. Finger and toe nails are developing. The facial features are becoming well defined, with an obvious chin, nose, and forehead. Eyes are fully formed and eyelids are developing. The baby is now starting to move the hands, legs, and head. At this point you will not feel the baby's movement.
    You may have gained about 3 to 4 pounds.” Tara’s attention was so focused on the book in front her that she didn’t notice Willow walking up behind her.

    Willow leaned against the doorframe and watched the blonde. Tara had been reading any and everything on pregnancy that she could find. If Tara wasn’t searching the subject in the net, she was buried under a pile of books. It was all rather cute in an obsessive nervous father type way.

    Tara looked up from the book and spotted Willow. “Hey Will, is everything ok? Do you need anything? Is the baby ok? What did the doctor say?”

    “Tara calm down. I’m fine and the baby’s fine. Will you just breathe for a second?” the red head laughed as she went and sat beside Tara on the couch.

    “Sorry, I did it again didn’t I?” the blonde blushed.

    “It’s ok, it’s cute. Doctor Chris says that everything is absolutely fine; I only had a small bout of morning sickness. He gave me some more vitamins and told me to start watching what I eat.”

    “So you’re ok?” Tara smiled in relief.

    ‘My god those lips, she’s so beautiful. I just want to… Damn these pregnancy hormones. That’s all it is, hormones of the pregnant variety. Not that hormones can be pregnant or any…’

    “Will, sweetie are you ok? You zoned out on me for a minute there. You’re not feeling faint or anything are you? Should I call Dr. Chris?”

    “No Tare, I’m fine. It just got kind of busy up here.” She tapped the side of her head.

    “Oh well I know how to cure that.” A smirk crossed Tara’s face. “Pancakes for dinner?”

    “Oh god you spoil me.”

    “I enjoy it.” Tara stood and placed a small kiss against Willow’s temple before heading for the kitchen.

    ‘It’s only the hormones… Yeah keep telling yourself that Rosenberg.’


    TBC…

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    Re: Little Surprises, AU

    Postby egyptianspirits » Wed May 11, 2005 11:45 am

    Great Update!!
    That was sooo cute how you had tara worring about willow so much its sweet i hope they get together soon :x
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    Re: Little Surprises, AU

    Postby cperrins78 » Wed May 11, 2005 12:40 pm

    Awww that was so sweet. I can't wait for things to develop between Willow & Tara. I also want to know who Michelle is.



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    Re: Little Surprises, AU

    Postby WT214 » Thu May 12, 2005 2:30 pm

    Yay update :party So cute with Tara trying to get as much info as possible. Can't wait till the next update.
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    Re: Little Surprises, AU

    Postby AlysonGoddess » Thu May 12, 2005 3:23 pm

    OMG!!!!!!! Fabulous update!!!! Can't wait for more!!!.... :)

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    *thumbs up*

    Postby Shai » Fri May 13, 2005 10:40 am

    One word : Cute! This fic has a lotta promise, and I for one will be waiting for your updates...did I mention the word 'eagerly'?! Keep em coming!
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    Re: Little Surprises, AU

    Postby Axel_Avalon » Tue May 17, 2005 7:44 pm

    Ok this a short chapter, but it's kinda cute.



    Title: Little Surprises, AU Part 3
    Disclaimer: We all know the sick twisted moronic genius who owns them, I am merely trying to soothe the wounds he so viciously inflicted. I don’t own the song either.
    Pairing: W/T
    Rating: PG (for now)
    Spoilers: None, completely AU
    Summary: Attempting to make a point to herself, Willow ends up with more than she bargained for.



    “TARA!!!”

    Tara sat bolt upright in bed when she heard Willow scream. She jumped out of bed and headed down the hall towards Willow’s room. She pushed the door open and saw Willow sitting up in bed cradling the small bulge in her stomach. Tara raced to the red head’s side. “Oh God Willow!!! Are you ok? Is it the baby?”

    “Tara shh, come here.” Willow pulled Tara to sit beside her in the bed. “I’m fine, but…” a tear escaped from Willow’s eye.

    “What is it sweetie?” Tara wiped away the tear and tucked some of Willow’s hair behind her ear.

    “I… I felt him move. Tara I felt him move.” Tears leaked from the red head’s eyes as she smiled brightly.

    “Oh Will, that’s great.” Tara hugged Willow and tried to hide her disappointment at missing the baby’s first movements.

    Willow a small wave of disappointment pass over. “Tara? Do you want to stay? In case the baby moves again?”

    “I’d like that.” Tara said softly.

    They both settled into bed with Tara spooned behind Willow with one hand on the redhead’s stomach. They lay there together until sleep claimed them.

    ********************

    Willow’s senses slowly awoke one by one. She felt a hand softly stroking her stomach and a soft body pressed against her back. Deep, steady breathing tickled the back of her neck. A soft sigh escaped her lips as she snuggled into the blonde behind her. ‘I could stay here forever.’ With a smile on her face, Willow closed her eyes and went back to sleep.

    TBC…


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    Re: Little Surprises, AU

    Postby WT214 » Wed May 18, 2005 9:53 pm

    Yay confimation :dance And yes sucha cute update :x and gonna add an awww. Can't wait to see how those two are gonna come together.
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    Re: Little Surprises, AU

    Postby tarawhipped » Thu May 19, 2005 7:47 pm

    DARN YOU, AXEL!!! *shakes fist* That was so damn lovely, but so damn SHORT! I hope they're going to start talking soon. I wonder if Tara has ever told Willow that she has feelings for her, or if she's assumed that since Willow's been her straight best friend, she doesn't want to ruin it. Nice to see Willow's emotions, but I can't tell if she recognizes them for what they are, or kust knows Tara makes her feel happy and safe. Kepp up the good work!

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    Re: Little Surprises, AU

    Postby Shai » Sat May 21, 2005 2:06 am

    Ok this is just adorable! That update was so awesomely sweet, and so frustratingly short all at once! I logged on today after 5 days and I went straight to looking dfor an update from u, but there was none (I'd read the last bit a back then but my computer refused to lemme reply at the time!!!Grrr) Anyway, this is a lovely story so far, and I can't wait to read more! Cheers!
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    Little Surprises, AU

    Postby Axel_Avalon » Sun Nov 13, 2005 12:16 am

    GREAT MERCIFUL ZESUS!!! AN UPDATE LOL!!!


    Title: Little Surprises, AU Part 4
    Disclaimer: We all know the sick twisted moronic genius who owns them, I am merely trying to soothe the wounds he so viciously inflicted.
    Pairing: W/T
    Rating: PG (for now)
    Spoilers: None, completely AU
    Summary: Attempting to make a point to herself, Willow ends up with more than she bargained for.




    Week 18- Start brushing up on your lullabies now - this week, your baby can hear! The bones of the inner ear and the nerve endings from the brain have developed enough so that your baby will hear sounds such as your heartbeat and blood moving through the umbilical cord. He or she may even be startled by loud noises! Your baby's eyes are developing, too - the retinas may be able to detect the beam of a flashlight if you hold it to your uterus.

    "Willow, are you here?" Tara yelled as she came through the front door.

    "Up here Tare!"

    Tara ran up the stairs and found Willow in her bed reading. "Wait til you see what I have."

    "Ooooh presents? Show me!" Willow set her book aside. She bounced up down on her bed excitedly.

    Tara giggled and picked up a bag she had set on the floor. She opened the bag and began pulling out piles of children's books. "I read somewhere that the baby should be able to hear us this week. I thought maybe you'd like to read to him. I got all the ones I could find and tomorrow I'll order some more." She placed the last of the books down on the bed.

    "Uh Tara, this is like 40 books. I doubt that the baby will need more right now." She looked at the books covering her bed with a soft smile. 'She's so cute'

    "Well there was one more but," Tara pulled a copy of Love You Forever from the bag, "but if you don't think he needs more books I can take it back. It wouldn't be a problem or..."

    "OH MY GOD!!!" Will quickly grabbed the book from Tara's hand and began flipping through the pages. "Tara I love this book. I can't believe that you could even find it."

    "Me neither, I've been looking everywhere for it. I finally found it at a christian book store downtown." Tara plopped back on the bed.

    "Tare this is really sweet, thank you."

    Tara gave Willow a small smile. "Anytime sweetie. I was thinking of maybe making lasagna tonight, I know how sick you are of all the healthy stuff lately."

    "What would I do without you?" Willow laid down and rested her head on Tara's chest.

    "I guess we'll never know"

    [hr]

    Tara sat in the living room reading Terror In The Mind Of God. She had read the book several times but on this night it wasn't holding her attention. Lately, things with Willow had fallen into a very comfortable and confusing place. They did everything together, shared a bed, acted like a couple... 'Why does this remind me of highschool?' Tara got up and went into the kitchen. She opened the freezer looking for the ice pops Willow had bought her early. Digging around in the freezer she found a carton of chocolate ice cream. 'Willow knows she shouldn't have this. It's not healthy for the baby.' Tara tossed the ice cream into the trash. 'Although, me flitting around here like an expectant father isn't healthy either.'
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    Re: Little Surprises, AU

    Postby tarebear » Sun Nov 13, 2005 1:20 am

    short update but an update nonetheless so i don't think anyone would mind too much...

    this is such a sweet story... please keep it up... though i'm a bit disturbed by tara's thoughts:

    'Although, me flitting around here like an expectant father isn't healthy either.'


    i hope willow realizes soon that she is indeed attracted to tara and it's not just because of the hormones or else tara might slip away from her fingers.

    anyway, who's this michelle willow mentioned in the first chapter? curious...

    update soon!
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    Re: Little Surprises, AU

    Postby Kaia » Sun Nov 20, 2005 6:41 pm

    Hey; Axel! :wave

    Wow, your story is so cute.
    It is so clear to see that our girls have really strong feelings for each other, even when you've given us little detail about their relationship (how they met, how long have they known each other, why did they end up living where they do...) :hmm
    I mean...who can just up and leave her work and for all we know her life on the opposite end of the country just to keep your "friend" company during her pregnancy (all 40 weeks of it)?

    Poor Tara, though. I've been in the place of practically having a relationship with your "straight best friend" where you did all the things couples do when in love except for the 'physical' part. It is demanding and painful and confusing and it drives you crazy. I put up with that for 2 years, I just hope you don't make us wait that long to get them together, where they belong. :happycry

    And WHO IS MICHELLE???? :confused

    I love your story. Please keep it up, and update soon. I'm sure we'll all be waiting. :impatient

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    Re: Little Surprises, AU

    Postby Artemis » Tue Nov 22, 2005 2:26 am

    I'm finding this story very sweet so far - Tara especially, staying with Willow, taking care of her :x She's clearly sorely tempted to keep living that role, so close to what she really wants between herself and Willow. Yet she's convinced that it can't last, and she's only going to be making it harder for herself the longer she ignores that.

    I hope Willow realises Tara's feelings soon, and returns them. After all, Tara does make an adorable 'father' :D
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    Re: Little Surprises, AU

    Postby Willow Watcher » Wed Nov 23, 2005 5:32 pm

    :bounce Willow's having a baby...Willow's having a baby. How cute is that and Tara being there playing the 'father' is just down right adorable. I love this story so far. Please continue with it. :bounce
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    Re: Little Surprises, AU

    Postby eirnlove » Thu Nov 24, 2005 3:15 am

    I am so caught! Please update more!!
    when you're with me, baby the skies will be blue, for all my life..
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    Re: Little Surprises, AU

    Postby AlysonGoddess » Fri Nov 25, 2005 12:04 am

    Man please continue this story has got me hooked update soon please!
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