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Cotton Fields

Postby terra21 » Mon Jun 06, 2005 9:21 pm

Alright, I had another idea for a fic, so I went with it. This is absolutely nothing like Prisoner of Choice, but I hope it finds its audience. Let me know what you guys think, k? I will be finishing Prisioner of Choice soon, so I will have more time in a few weeks to work on this baby.

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Rating: PG (for now)
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Genre: Alternate Universe
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Summary: In post Civil War Alabama, Tara Maclay tries to retain her cotton farm by hiring two Confederate soldiers working their way back home.
Notes: I did research for this fiction. Yes, I did. I spent many hours on the Smithsonian website and several others perusing the Civil War section of my local bookstore. But, alas, I found a novel in the romance section, “Love Me Tonight” by Nan Ryan (copyright 1994) that aligned with the ideas and atmosphere I wanted to write about. I have adapted the basic storyline in this book to fit Cotton Fields. Therefore, this fiction is based on Ms. Ryan’s novel but has been adapted to capture the dynamic between our beloved Willow and Tara.


Chapter 1

The sound of a rooster crowing was the only clatter on the Maclay farm at daybreak. The south Alabama cotton farm had seen noisy mornings in the past, but this wasn’t one of them. Slowly, but surely, the sun crept up over the horizon to blanket the bare cotton fields with rays of light. That same orange hue struck the face of Tara Maclay as she walked towards the old barn carrying a wooden bucket. A small black and white kitten followed closely behind the winsome blonde haired girl. The kitten was trying to keep her paws out of the dew-soaked grass by hopping from one dirt spot to another; she had almost mastered this route to the barn for the daily cow milking. Her owner giggled sweetly as she watched the kitten shake a white paw that had strayed into the damp grass.

The pair came to a stop at the gate and the blonde girl hung her bucket on the fence post. She reached for the catch and pulled up to release the wooden gate then pushed slightly to let the kitten run through the opening. As she followed her feline friend inside, her skirt caught on a rusty nail protruding from the creosote post. The ripping sound of the cloth brought her attention down to the gash in her pleats. With a deep sigh she shook her head from side to side and committed to memory yet another task on her endless to do list. The girl unraveled the cloth from around the nail head to inspect the tear; she thought she might have enough white thread to repair it in her mama’s mending kit.

Smoothing the worn skirt back into place Tara paused to remember when her mother gave her the calico dress. It had been fours years ago. The war was underway and Donnie had just been drafted. Her mother had spent countless hours in her rocking chair with needle and thread sewing the dress for her only daughter. Making the dress seemed to be a way for her mother to keep her mind off the pending fate of her only son. Tara painfully reminisced about how excited but sad she was when her mother brought the dress to her room the morning they were to see Donnie off. Her mother’s eyes welled with tears as Tara tried on the dress. It was a meager triumph on a day of impending defeat. The blonde closed her eyes briefly to shake the feelings as she shut the gate.

Taking her bucket from its position on the post, the blonde crossed the barnyard to pull open the double doors to the stalls. With well worn hands, she grabbed the stool from its hook on the wall and proceeded to the milk cow’s booth. The black and white heifer had her head hung over the gate and snorted as Tara stroked down the middle of her forehead, “good morning Bessie,” she said lowly. The blonde placed the stool down and moved to the hay bin. She put three double handfuls of silage at Bessie’s front feet and then went inside the stall with the cow.

After milking Bessie, and giving the kitten a squirt or two of the tasty milk treat, Tara put the bucket of cream on a bench and went to feed Jasper, her pride and joy. The six year old sorrel was her 16th birthday present; even though her Daddy didn’t care that it was her birthday he figured she’d be delighted to take care of the animal, which meant less work for him. Jasper was in the last stall of the barn. He’d been watching her the whole time as she maneuvered around doing her morning ritual. Before feeding him, she placed both hands on either side of the steed’s snout. Knowing this daily rite, Jasper leaned his large head forward and let the blonde kiss between his eyes as she scratched his jowls, “good morning Jasper.” She went in his stall and opened the window to the outside, letting the morning breeze flow through the barn.

After placing a sufficient amount of hay in Jasper’s trough, she filled a bucket full of dried corn kernels. Chickens scattered everywhere when she opened the gate out to the back of the barn. They knew it was feeding time and carried on as such. Tara grabbed one handful after another and scattered the feed about the pen as she watched the corn splay through the air and hit the ground. The rapid pecking of her chicks cleaned the feed up kernel by kernel.

The early May sun was up over the tree line now, in two hours time it would be beaming down without remorse on her in the cotton fields. She looked to the bare fields and pondered the planting season and how she’d make it through. She had 30 acres to plant, tend and harvest alone, otherwise she’d lose the farm. She walked back to the barn worrying. As she approached, she noticed the kitten in Jasper’s window cleaning her paws and watching the chickens eat. “Let’s go Miss Kitty,” the cat was quick to follow Tara as she picked up the bucket of milk.

Tara made her way back to the big country house and climbed up the rear steps. She sat the bucket on the porch so Mammy Ginny could churn it for butter. Pulling open the screen door to the kitchen she watched Ginny put a plate full of biscuits on the table. “Smells good Ms. Ginny,” she sniffed the air and smiled warmly at the middle-aged black woman.

“Miss Tara you betta pull up a cheer an git you sum befo that youngin of mine gits down here,” she warned the blonde girl of the pending arrival of her 8 year old with a bottomless stomach.

“Yes ma’am,” Tara obliged and drew out one of the wooden chairs to take a seat at the table.

The woman screamed, “Abraham! Brekfass is dun!”

Both of the women heard the boy’s tiny feet hit the hardwood floor above them and run to the stairs. Within moments he was skidding up to the table in a long night shirt. “Mornin Miss Tara, mornin Mama.” He said while grabbing three biscuits to put on his plate. The boy clearly favored his daddy, Mr. Thomas Washington. He was tall and slender, unlike Mammy Ginny who was short and round.

“You think daddy’ll be home taday?” He asked before sticking a biscuit in his mouth.

“Don’t you worry ‘bout that, just eat up yo brekfass.” Ginny scolded. They had last heard from Thomas four weeks ago when he telegraphed from New Orleans to say that he’d be making his way back home. That was three days after the war had ended. Fortunately, Thomas had made it through the war alive. Donnie had not.

Tara knew Ginny was anxiously awaiting Thomas’s return. She also felt terrible that the woman’s husband had been drafted into the war to fight for a cause he certainly did not support. Tara hoped that the man would stay on and help with the cotton harvest, but she would surely understand if the Washington’s chose to leave. The blonde told Mammy Ginny she could stay on the farm as long as she liked, but Ginny reminded Tara that she had never felt like a servant on this farm. Tara also knew that the woman was speaking with the exception of Mr. Maclay. She went on to tell the girl that this farm was the only home she had ever known and she, Thomas, and Abe weren’t going anywhere.

Tara prodded, “Ginny, please sit down and eat with us. Those dishes can wait a little while.” The woman put her towel down and joined her family at the table.

The youngster spoke up for the first time after being reprimanded, “Mama, kin I go hep Miss Tara in the fields?”

Before Ginny could respond, Tara winked at the boy and told him he could come along only if ate everything on his plate. To which he began to gobble up the food in earnest. He loved to spend time with Tara; he’d even confided in her that she was not as cranky as his Mama. Tara giggled and told him it would be best if he didn’t tell his mother that she was cranky.

After finishing up breakfast, the blue eyed blonde exited the front door of the house on her way to the fields. She halted abruptly at the top of the steps when she saw two soldiers traipsing up the lane to her house. Abe came running out the screen door and let it slap back against the doorframe. The thin boy ducked into Tara’s skirts when he saw the strangers approaching. The men, or rather young men, were dressed in Confederate uniforms.

She looked down to the boy and directed, “Abe go in the house and tell Ginny to bring me my pistol.” She motioned with her head towards the men, “they could be Yankee posers.” The boy took off immediately, and within seconds Mammy was on the porch alongside Tara. The older woman handed the blonde her pistol, and in turn Tara buried it in the folds of her pleated skirt.

*

Will Rosenberg kicked at the dirt outside of the General Store in downtown Greenville, Alabama. He looked from one end of the dusty street to the other and pondered where to seek out employment. His Confederate comrade and cousin Xander Harris strolled from the diner in which they had just eaten. “Well, where do you suppose we try first Will?” The darker haired boy asked.

“I figure we could try the feed and seed place. They may need some laborers.” Will flashed his emerald green eyes at his cousin, “watch out!”

His warning was too late. An older gentleman exiting the General Store backwards with his hands full bumped into Xander, knocking him off the wood planked side walk. The dark haired boy regained his balance in the street as Will helped the man with his goods.

“Oh dear, I’m terribly sorry young man,” the gentleman apologized voicing a pronounced English accent.

“No problem sir,” Xander said as he helped the man with his items as well. The three fumbled to the man’s wagon and loaded his supplies.

After settling his cargo the man turned to his helpers noting their grey uniforms and introduced himself, “Ah, thank you very much, Rupert Giles.”

The redheaded Will stuck his hand out promptly, “Will Rosenberg, and this here is my cousin, Xander Harris.”

“Nice to meet your acquaintance, you boys headed home from your tour of duty?” Mr. Giles cordially extended.

Xander was eager to elaborate, “Yes sir, we were stationed on The Tennessee under General Faragut’s Navy at Mobile Bay. We’re working our way back to Tennesee, the state not the boat, and my sweetheart.” He lowered his voice and head; he began to push the dirt around with his boots, “just need to make some more money.” Will glanced at him with pity and then to Mr. Giles.

Mr. Giles removed his brown hat, took a handkerchief from his pocket, and proceeded to wipe his forehead. “Hmm, I believe my neighbor is in need of a few laborers for the cotton season. Would you like a ride? It’s the least I can do for a couple of brave young men.” The older gentleman offered as he took his seat on the wagon.

“Absolutely!” Will perked up. Xander shot the red head a strange look after his high pitched acceptance. Will shoved the boy towards the back and both of them hopped on with enthusiasm. Mr. Giles’ bid had come not a moment too soon. The boys had run out of money earlier than they expected. Hopefully the job lead would pan out and Will could help get his cousin back in time to marry his sweetheart before the fall.

As the wooden wagon rattled along the dirt road, Will sat facing Xander who was napping against a bail of hay as they traveled. He didn’t understand how the boy slept with so much motion and noise. As children Xander was the same way, he could fall asleep anywhere. He had even fallen asleep once near the railroad tracks by their home in Tennessee and never woke up as the train roared past. The wagon jostled over several bumps and Xander’s head bobbled against the hay. Will shook his head full of flamey red hair then looked to the fields they were riding past.

After several miles and many cotton fields, Mr. Giles pulled up reins on his horses to bring the wagon to a stop at the end of a tree lined lane. “Here we are boys. Follow that lane for about a half mile and you’ll reach the Maclay home.”

“Thank you, sir,” Xander replied abruptly, as Will jabbed him awake with his brogans. He and Will hopped from the wagon and grabbed their knapsacks, securing them snuggly to their backs.

“If you’re ever in town, come by to see me at the school.” Mr. Giles slapped the reins to move his horses again, “Have a good day,” he remarked as the horses trotted off.

The dark haired boy plunked his grey slouch uniform hat on his head, “why’d you hafta hit me?”

“If I hadn’t you’d still be sleeping on the back of that wagon.” Will replied while pointing down the road at the carriage.

“Nah,” Xander put his big clumsy arm around his cousins neck and proceeded to tousle his red hair. Will squirmed loose to punch the taller boy in the chest. “Ow, owwie, do ya hafta be so rough Will?”

The red head rolled his green eyes at his cousin then started up the drive, “Let’s go.” He situated his hat on his head and pushed the growing red locks over his ears.

The smell of honeysuckles permeated the soldier’s noses as they marched up the lane in search of employment. Will fixed his eyes on the pretty yellow and white wildflowers that reminded him of home and breathed the sweet fragrance in deep. Xander on the other hand spied a small patch of blackberries along the roadside and went over to pick the biggest blackest ones he could find before Will had a chance to discover them. Realizing that his cousin had found some treats Will hurried over to indulge as well. The two stood over the bush until nothing was left but green and red berries.

Continuing on, they saw the pointed rooftop of a house appear over the rise. The further they walked the more of the white house that appeared, until finally the home place was spread before them with fields to east and a tree line in the distance. A little more and they could see a rickety brown barn to the rear. Will noticed the unkempt flower beds and wondered how long it had been since someone had taken care of them. He then fixated on the front porch and the swing that swayed gently in the wind. When the screen door swung open Will suddenly felt like a Union bayonet had penetrated his lungs. His breath rushed from him the moment he laid eyes on the alluring blonde emerging from the house.


TBC
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Re: Cotton Fields

Postby watty » Mon Jun 06, 2005 10:24 pm

The way you wrote the atmosphere, with the farm and the cotton fields, for some reason give me a Grapes of Wrath vibe, but hell I'm a Pom living over yonder the other side of the world, what do I know about anything :P?

Is this what you write when you're blocked on PoC? Gasp, it's soooo different, in a good way of course. You put in so many small details, that paint a fascinating picture of the setting.

the kitten shake a white paw that had strayed into the damp grass

Don't you love it when they do that? shake their paws quicker than the eye can blink? Gorgeous.

I can feel the sense of sadness inside Tara. Her brother is gone (obviously this is a better Donnie than canon) and I think her mother too? How you show us, rather than tell us, that she is struggling.

With a deep sigh she shook her head from side to side and committed to memory yet another task on her endless to do list.

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She had 30 acres to plant, tend and harvest alone, otherwise she’d lose the farm.


The players are slowly gathering, though I did a double-take when Will and Xander first appeared. I was like WTF? Will's a HE? I know there's more though *settles down for long read*.

Finally, again with the small details,

Will noticed the unkempt flower beds and wondered how long it had been since someone had taken care of them.

One, again with Tara's struggles on the farm. Two, that Will noticed shows a sensitivity and awareness that I hope you will build on.

That was great :clap, and your extensive research shines through. Thanks for this, buddy.
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Re: Cotton Fields

Postby cooper » Tue Jun 07, 2005 12:52 am

Really great start. As someone who grew up in the South, I am obsessed with Southern stories and literature because I can feel so much of the stories as part of my upbringing. As I no longer live in the South because its a little too oppressive, Southern stories are a way for me to connect with the good memories I have of the South. I look forward to more and more.

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Re: Cotton Fields

Postby cperrins78 » Tue Jun 07, 2005 2:50 am

I'm hooked already. I'm eagerly awaiting the first meeting of "Will" & Tara. I love stories set in the Civil War era, I'm such a history buff. Update soon.



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Re: Cotton Fields

Postby kisstheviolets » Tue Jun 07, 2005 7:43 am

phenomenal start terra. you've painted such a vivid picture of tara's life, and as a history nerd i'm happy for anything that combines two of my favorite things: history & w/t. now i have this AND ringwaldoeuvre's "huddled masses" to get my fix with. woohoo. as for your story, i'm thinking willow's pulling a deborah sampson (the state heroine of my adopted homestate of massachusetts) and i'm betting that's what xander's strange look was all about.

can't wait for the next update!! who would have thought i'd ever be so excited about something sans smut?? :blush

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Re: Cotton Fields

Postby Willow~Rosenberg » Tue Jun 07, 2005 10:37 am

Ooooh, wow. Really great start. I'm already captivated by what you've written and many people have already expressed the same things that I am wondering. Will is actually Willow, yeah? Leading to why is she pretending to be a guy. Hmm. :hmm I know that you'll answer the questions in due time, I'm just all excited about this new story.
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Re: Cotton Fields

Postby meretricious » Wed Jun 08, 2005 12:46 pm

hey terra, have to agree with watson, the difference between this and poc borders on schizophrenic (or maybe you're just complex :) )
love the mood you're setting in the early stages here. the way tara interacts with her animals is so tender, yet there's a palpable sense of emptiness, too. and this line "it was a meager triumph on a day of impending defeat" breaks my heart a little.
and young abraham, wanting to spend all his time with tara, well, who wouldn't? smart kid.
and this : "the state,not the boat", cracked me up. not sure tara has a lot of funds to pay these two, but why would will want to leave anyway? let's just get the cotton planted and send xander off to his sweetheart and everyone will live happily ever after. you're not gonna make it that easy though, are ya?~mary
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Re: Cotton Fields

Postby sam7777 » Wed Jun 08, 2005 5:31 pm

I have a big interest in the Civil War so this is a great setting. You have a real eye for detail but also for dialogue. Each character has their own voice. It'll be interesting to see why "Will" decided to go to war and how long it will take Tara to figure out "his" secret. Great start! I'm finding that I just love W/T in a 19th century seting. Guess it's because I love to read history.
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Re: Cotton Fields

Postby Reallybigpineapple » Wed Jun 08, 2005 6:47 pm

Really looking forward to the rest of this!
Being damaged by reading Gone with the wind 6 times before I was 12, I think this is a wonderful setting. Also, I really loved The Rosenberg Institute, so it's great that someone has taken on the responsibility of providing a civil war-era fix in its absence!
Could "Will" in this story be the "father" of Will in The Legend of Green Eyed Red? :-D
Great thought having Giles as the school teacher! Really like the way you write the "boys" as well, especially Xander, who seems to fit right in with this setting!
I hope we get to see more of Giles and, obviously, some smut or smootchies would be kinda nice in due time :-D
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Re: Cotton Fields

Postby taralicious » Thu Jun 09, 2005 9:46 pm

OOOOOOOOO, Civil War era Willow and Tara goodness.
All we need now is for them to be singing "Cotton Fields" while they labor in the hot sun.
Alltogether now, as John Fogerty sang,
"When I was a little bitty baby, my mama would rock me in the cradle,
In them ol' cotton fields back home
It was down in Louisiana just about a mile from Texarkana
In them ol' cotton fields back home"
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Re: Cotton Fields

Postby GayNow » Mon Jun 13, 2005 9:15 pm

Terra~

Great start here, babe! I love love LOVE Civil War Era stories. My master's thesis dealt with narratives written by women during the CW, so I have a particular affinity for the time period.

You've captured the details so nicely. And your writing flows beautifully -- so easy to read. I'm not pulled out of the story by an awkward moment of dialogue or an inaccurate description. Well done!

So I'm intrigued to see how "Will" and Xander are going to work their way into Tara's home, so to speak. I can't wait to see what you have planned. ;)

Looking forward to more!

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Re: Cotton Fields

Postby Artemis » Tue Jun 28, 2005 8:35 am

Sorry I'm late joining the Cotton Fields party. This is great! I love reading history-based stories, and finding the flavour of each era and setting. You've put a lot of work into crafting this, and I think it's wonderful - the world around Tara seems vivid, real, and fascinating, from the quiet of her going out to milk the cows (with adorable Miss Kitty - I love the detail of her little paw-shake, it's so spot-on), then the lively family feel of Ginny and Abe, but still with the spectre of the war's effects present, and then the reminder that they're still in preilous times, having to keep a pistol on hand when strangers show up.

And Will, of course, is a fascinating puzzle. Did 'he' conceal the relevant bits of anatomy to join up? To stay with Xander, perhaps? Does Xander know? I initially thought probably, but the curious look he gave when Will's voice sounded high suggests not - that'll be a big relevation if/when he finds out. And Tara, of course, Will's obviously quite taken with her apearance.

I'm really looking forward to more. Thanks for the great start :bow
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Re: Cotton Fields

Postby RageMore7 » Tue Jun 28, 2005 11:08 am

ohhhh come on! there has to be more than that!! i love civil war type stories. north and south series is my favorite! gosh i like all of it!

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Re: Cotton Fields

Postby ringwaldoeuvre » Tue Jun 28, 2005 7:04 pm

This is fascinating, and very well written. I love stories in a historical context, and you have just the right touch of factual detail to immerse this reader. You craft the tone of the story very well, and seem to foreshadow quite a few things with subtlety. I will keep my predictions to myself, lest I inadvertently blow your spot. I am very much looking forward to more.

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Re: Cotton Fields

Postby kytzya » Mon Jul 04, 2005 5:00 am

Well, all i can say is that i am quite engaged in this story and can't wait until i read more. i mean, u are still writing...right, ur not ganna let us be waiting for ever....like a day or two...mmm...i think this is going to be a lovely beginning of an amazing story. RAWK ON!!!
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Cotton Fields feedback replies

Postby terra21 » Wed Jul 13, 2005 3:52 pm

watson – Muchly different than POC! But that’s ok, right? I’m trying my best to create a southern atmosphere with this fic, I’m glad it’s coming across. Donnie is not canon, he was a good brother. As for Mr. and Mrs. Maclay well, that will come in due time bud. Oh, and Will being a boy, that’s just something you’ll hafta keep reading to find out ;)

irene73 – Thanks for reading. I did do a lot of web research, but for the most part this stuff comes natural because I’m from the south. I too love anything from the Antebellum, Civil War, and Reconstruction Eras. See comment to Watson above about Will being a boy. And yes, I think the Olsen House is a fair description, except for the lane leading up to the house. I hope the next chapter will help clarify that statement. Abe and Ginny are era characters, gotta have em in there.

cooper – I hope I continue to spark memories of your motherland  Thank you!

cperrins78 – Thank you Christina. I like history so much, I got a minor in it! LOL. Sadly, the updates for this story won’t be fast, I’m taking my time with this one.

kisstheviolets – Thanks Brandy. It really means a lot that you are able to visualize the setting by my descriptions. Can’t say anymore about Will, you’ll just have to read to find out. As for smut, this will be nothing like POC. Sorry, no cheap thrills here.

Willow~Rosenburg – Thanks chica, keep reading, I think you’ll get your answers soon. 

meretricious – Was this moody? Cool. Abe does have the right idea wanting to stick with Tara all day. Hell I would too, no matter how hot the sun!

sam7777 – So sure that Will is Willow eh? Hehehe. Thank you for the nice comments. I’m trying to pack as much detail into this fic as possible without overload.

reallybigpineapple – Eek! That’s way too heavy reading for a kid, well me as a kid. Dude, did you just dis PIPS? LOL. Stick around for smoochies, they may show up. Thanks!

taralicious – Thanks for reading Blaine.

GayNow – Thank you Car, I will take all these comments as a compliments coming from someone who did a master thesis on this era. Thanks so much.

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RageMore7 – Impatient much? LOL. There is more and it’s coming, I promise. Thank you sionan.

ringwaldoveure – Well, that’s a whole lot of nice things you just said Mary. Thank you, *blushes.* Really, thank you. Oh and about blowing my spot, don’t cha hate when folks do that 

kytzya – Sorry for making you wait, but I’ll say it again, updates will not be frequent unless I’m super inspired. I’m letting this story come to me, and I’m gonna be taking time to write it. Now having said that, I’m really excited that you like it! Thank you so much.
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Re: Cotton Fields

Postby terra21 » Wed Jul 13, 2005 4:29 pm

Disclaimer: All BtVS characters belong to Joss Whedon, etc. I own nothing, please don't sue me.
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Rating: PG (for now)
Spoilers: None
Genre: Alternate Universe
Distribution: Ask first, thanks.
Summary: In post Civil War Alabama, Tara Maclay tries to retain her cotton farm by hiring two Confederate soldiers working their way back home.
Notes: I did research for this fiction. Yes, I did. I spent many hours on the Smithsonian website and several others perusing the Civil War section of my local bookstore. But, alas, I found a novel in the romance section, “Love Me Tonight” by Nan Ryan (copyright 1994) that aligned with the ideas and atmosphere I wanted to write about. I have adapted the basic storyline in this book to fit Cotton Fields. Therefore, this fiction is based on Ms. Ryan’s novel but has been adapted to capture the dynamic between our beloved Willow and Tara.


Chapter 2


Tara Maclay stood on her front porch maintaining a tight hold on the pistol concealed within her pleats as the young men made their way towards her. They appeared to be Union Soldiers, but Tara had heard many stories about Yankee posers using the guise of Southern Militia, only to ransack and set fire to homes and crops.

Donnie had shown her how to handle the revolver against her father’s wishes. Her brother told her, “You never know when you may need to defend yourself, Tara.” He was right, and now she was prepared to do whatever it took to keep her family and farm safe. The closer the boys came to the porch, the more firmly she griped her handgun. She was not, by any means, afraid to use the weapon.

The locusts in the live oaks that lined the narrow road to the Maclay home noisily accompanied the visitors. Underneath the massive hovering hardwood limbs, Will Rosenberg sucked in a deep breath of humid air, trying to shake the nervousness he had developed after seeing the blonde girl exit the house. It had been a long while since he had been in the presence of such a strikingly beautiful woman. Will watched the blonde intently as he and Xander paced up the lane, but as they neared the porch he was unable to meet her gaze, instead choosing to stare at his feet and fidget.

The soldiers came to a halt and Xander looked at Will expectantly, but his cousin who normally ‘did the talking’ appeared preoccupied by his coat buttons. Recognizing that Will wasn’t going to speak, the dark haired boy looked back to his welcoming committee and snatched off his hat, “Good mornin’ ladies.” He proceeded to whack Will on the arm with his hat reminding the redhead to remove his own in the company of women. Realizing his rudeness, Will quickly removed his cover, leaving his red locks in disarray.

“My name is Alexander Harris, and this is my cousin Will Rosenberg.”

“What’s your b-business here?” Tara asked curtly, her slight stutter betraying her nervousness.

Xander squinted one eye because of the brightness of the sun beaming over the house as he spoke to Tara, “Work, we’re here for work. Your neighbor, Mister, um, Mister…” He wrung his slouch hat in his hands.

“Giles,” Will supplied as he finally made eye contact with the blue eyed blonde.

Tara almost shivered in the hot morning sun when the green eyed stranger caught her gaze.

Amazing.

Taking a moment to regain her composure, Tara queried, “What kind of work are you looking for?” Surely Mr. Giles wouldn’t send riffraff to my house. She trusted her neighbor very much. He had been most helpful since the passing of her parents, and knew well the struggles she faced.

“Anything ma’am, we’re broke and trying to get back home,” Xander continued.

“How long will you be available?” She was desperately in need of help, no doubt.

“As long as you need us,” Xander blurted when given that thread of hope. The young men looked at one another anxiously.

Ginny, who had stood by silently until now, stepped up and touched the young girl’s arm. Tara acknowledged the worried indication from the woman with a single nod, then spoke to Will and Xander, “Excuse me gentlemen, I’ll be right back.” She retreated into the house with Mammy Ginny and Abe on her heels.

“Miss Tara, I’s not tryin to mine yo bizness,” Ginny began, “but you thank you kin truss dem boys?”

“Mammy, first of all, this is your home too and if I invite someone to stay then you have every right to express concern,” Tara reminded the older woman. “And I don’t think Mr. Giles would have sent them to my doorstep if he thought they would do any harm. Besides, we really need the help, at least until Thomas gets home.” The fact that the green eyed redhead may have been influencing Tara’s decision was never mentioned to Mammy.

Abe stood at the screen door ogling the strangers as the two women debated. Xander smiled and waved at the boy in an attempt to make friends, but Abe dove into the skirts of his mother who stood just behind him the hallway. Will could clearly see the large round white eyeballs peering out from behind Ginny’s dress, but could barely make out the profile of the blonde standing just inside the doorway. He continued to try though, as he eagerly awaited the return of the beautiful girl.

“Wut ‘bout folks in town, wut dey gon say ‘bout you puttin up two mens?” Ginny expressed concern for Tara’s reputation.

Tara pondered that for a moment then responded, “Let ‘em talk, my concern is keeping this farm.” The blonde spun to go back outside.

Ginny smiled widely after the girl turned her back. She was so proud of the sometimes stubborn Tara, “Well, in dat case, I’s go gits dem sum brekfass and put it on de back porch.”

Tara paused before opening the screen door, “That’s an excellent idea Mammy, I’m sure it’s been a long time since they’ve had a decent meal.”

Will watched the blonde reemerge from the house, his heart racing as he silently prayed she would employ them.

Pausing at the top of the steps Tara put her hands on her hips, “I expect you both to be up at dawn everyday except Sunday,” she began, “I will make a list of chores that will need to be accomplished daily before we head off to the fields.”

Both young men breathed a huge sigh of relief as they glanced at one another. Xander quickly expressed his gratitude, “Thank you, thank you very much, Miss...”

“Maclay, but you may call me Tara. Follow me,” she descended the steps and moved towards the barn, speaking as she walked, “There is a crop bin in the barn that you can use as your living facilities.” Tara pointed across the field to the east of the house, “See that tree line over there, just inside the woods there’s a creek that you can use to bathe.” She stopped momentarily to face the soldiers, “I won’t be able to pay you anything until after the first trip to the cotton gin.”

“That’s fine, we’ll take it, I just wanna git back to my sweetie,” the dark haired boy bubbled. Tara smiled kindly at the thought of the boy missing his darling.

Will couldn’t help but focus on the curvy hips of the blonde as they approached the barn. Ashamed of himself, he averted his eyes until the girl opened the barnyard gate and then he paid close attention as she gave them more instructions. He tried to make eye contact again with Tara, but this time the girl blushed and looked away quickly.

So sweet.

Pushing a strand of blonde hair behind her ear she continued, “You m-may have the rest of the day to get settled in, but I expect you to be prepared to work in the morning.” She led them into the section of the barn where there was no livestock, “here you are,” she waved a hand around. Farm equipment and other odds and ends were stacked about, “You may move the things out of here and into the adjacent b-bin. Later today we can bring out mattresses that aren’t being used from the house.”

“Oh yes, Ginny is preparing you both a breakfast plate, she will serve it to you on the back porch.”

Xander lit up immediately, they had only been able to afford a meager portion of food this morning and it was already wearing off.

“Thank you very much ma’am,” Will expressed as Tara made her way back to the door.

The blonde let his sincerity soak in only for a moment before she replied, “You’re welcome, but there’s one more thing,” her deep blue eyes met with Will’s emerald green ones, “I sleep with a pistol under my pillow and I am not afraid to use it. Don’t ever come into my house uninvited or you will surely meet the barrel of that gun.”

Shock swept over Will’s face, he couldn’t believe the seemingly soft-spoken woman could be such a spitfire. It intrigued him; he was rapidly becoming fascinated by more than the blonde’s beauty.
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Re: Cotton Fields

Postby watty » Wed Jul 13, 2005 5:53 pm

I dunno, T, this is soooo atmospheric, almost genteel (well, except the Tara spitfire with pistol under her bed) it's so unlike you :lmao cos if I said to you, how genteel you are miz terra *together the batting eyelids*, you'll just laugh in my face and then slap my head just about now, right? Seriously, I don't know much about the south, but I feel I'm there, Ginny's dialect, the farm, the dialogue, everything.

Oh, in case you didn't know ... I love it, yeah, that was a left handed way of saying it, but I do.

One of the things I love is how you put in the small details. The cat's paws in the last update and this time
The locusts in the live oaks that lined the narrow road to the Maclay home noisily accompanied the visitors.

When I was young, there was a big tree at the back garden of our apartment block and we'd hear crickets (not locusts) but it brings back memories. Of course we also had lots of lizards in the apartment but they ate mosquitoes so we tolerated them.

I have to smile at Will's shyness at meeting Tara, so sweet. Methinks young Will is already in love.

And the effect on Tara too
Tara almost shivered in the hot morning sun when the green eyed stranger caught her gaze.

I think the attraction goes both ways.

Now one thing is still bugging me, if Will and Xander are living in the cotton bin and they're to bathe in the creek ... does it mean Xander and his cousin ... in the creek ... bathing ... cos you have to take your clothes off when you bathe ... argh! the imagery!

*calms down* Will can always hide, and whether or not Xander knows, well I'm gonna have to wait, and you're gonna tease, yes I know.
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Re: Cotton Fields

Postby Willow~Rosenberg » Wed Jul 13, 2005 7:15 pm

Sigh. I love stories from this period and the fact that its Will and Tara makes it that much better. When I was younger, a lot of the stories that I read were from the Civil War time. As watson pointed out, I like how you incorporate the rich details, such as the locusts, into the story. I grinned when Tara shocked Will by saying she slept with a pistol under her pillow. I am very intrigued to find out more about this world as you reveal it.
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Re: Cotton Fields

Postby GayNow » Wed Jul 13, 2005 8:22 pm

T~

Again, you've provided us with a rich, vivid update. Everything is so beautifully written. Each word seems lovingly chosen. So wonderful. You really paint a lovely picture.

It's clear that Tara and Will are attracted to each other. Yet the manifestation of that attraction is so subtle...at least I think so. I don't know, others may disagree. But that's my story and I'm stickin' to it.

Really nicely done, T. Looking forward to the next installment.

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Re: Cotton Fields

Postby sam7777 » Thu Jul 14, 2005 6:34 pm

I love the dynamic between Tara and "Will" (and yeah I'm pretty sure that Will is Willow). The tension of their meeting with Tara's caution and Will's hoping was palpable. The sights and scents of the farm enhanced an already vivid scene. They face some tough times ahead. Great update!!
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Re: Cotton Fields

Postby Artemis » Fri Jul 15, 2005 7:48 am

Spitfire Tara, yum! :x That was great, I could feel the nervousness in the air, Tara wondering if she could trust these two, Xander and Will trying to make a good impression, and Will and Tara getting tingles from each other already :blush

Along with others here I'm wondering about Will bathing in the creek with Xander - going with the idea that Xander doesn't know about 'Willow's bits' (and lack of other bits), does this mean Will's going to have to sneak off to bathe in seclusion. Somewhere where, perhaps, unknown to Will, Tara might coincidentally happen to be passing by...? :D
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Re: Cotton Fields

Postby Foof » Fri Jul 15, 2005 12:04 pm

Honestly, I was going to stay away from this story - not because I haven't been impressed with your other fics, but because iI have the feeling that it's going to be long and I didn't know how many more long fics I would be able to manage reading all at once.

I'm glad my willpower gave way - this is a truly beautiful story. Visually stunning, really. Like quite a few other AU stories, I have no prior knowledge of the setting (or, in this case, really, the historical context) , your attention to detail has me completely mesmerized and engaged in this story. For a setting so unfamiliar, I can imagine it so well.

Am I in the right timeframe to be picturing "Gone with the Wind?"
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Re: Cotton Fields

Postby hermitfish » Fri Jul 15, 2005 12:40 pm

Very nice start...I like. Historical timeline gives lots of room for strife and exploration. You're describing the setting and atmosphere beautifully. Looking forward to where you take this.

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Re: Cotton Fields

Postby meretricious » Tue Jul 19, 2005 7:44 am

terra, very nice update! love all the details you're including, the little moments like xander squinting into the sun, and abe hiding in his momma skirts, makes every moment so easy to picture. and all the shy glances and blushing between will and tara, very sweet.
i'm really getting a kick out of the will/xander dynamic, xander waiting for will to speak, and then hitting him with his cap, again i can just absolutely see every moment of that in my mind, plus it made me giggle. more soon?~mary
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Re: Cotton Fields

Postby fun in dysfuntion » Wed Jul 20, 2005 5:11 pm

Hi Terra,

A very impressive story. Your eye for details and ear for dialogue make this story quite remarkable. I enjoy the stories where Willow masquerades as a male. Although most likely for the freedom that being male allows her, I’m interested in the reasons behind why she not only changed her gender but also joined the confederate army.

I look forward to your updates.

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Re: Cotton Fields

Postby beanie » Fri Jul 22, 2005 10:50 pm

First of all, you handled the dialect so completely well. I'm convinced that I'm reading Zora Neal Hurston and not something from Different Colored Pens. The amount of research you seemed to have put in is impressive. So thank you for taking so much time to create this beautiful story.

Every one else pretty much hit the nail on its head when they commended you on your fantastic imagery. I was very much myself transported to the 1800s with them plantation and things. Definitely the "locusts" line. Most definitely. :-D

I'm eager to see how you'll have the whole Will/Willow thing play out. Very eager . . . So eager, I may not move from this spot until I see wat comes on next :x

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Re: Cotton Fields

Postby Reallybigpineapple » Sat Jul 23, 2005 7:59 am

Hi!
What can I say? I come from geek infested roots :-D
I certainly did not dis Pips. I wouldn't dare, Pips rules! I did, however, dis the absence of Pips, update-wise :glasses
Do we sense a bathing scene coming on?
More, more!
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Re: Cotton Fields

Postby JustSkipIt » Thu Aug 18, 2005 1:54 pm

Hey there,
I hadn't gotten started on this fic and I'm not sure why. You're right that it's very very far from PoC. I really like the way that you've set it up so far. I mean yes, Tara as a Southern woman wanting to keep her farm and Willow as a Confederate soldier working her way back home? Not exactly the expected set up. The Tara you have presented seems quite confident even in this precarious situation and even without Donnie and her parents. Of course we don't have an explanation for her parents' absense but I can just imagine.

I haven't read the other comments but I'm sure that others have commented on Willow=Will and being interested in that setup. My guess would be that she entered the army thinking that she could keep Xander safe and has continued that goal throughout. The instant attraction between the two is quite intriguing. As a fellow Southerner, I'll be quite interested in your depiction of the heat!

Well done.
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Re: Cotton Fields

Postby terra21 » Wed Feb 08, 2006 9:16 pm

Watty – Genteel? Did you look that word up in the “Dictionary of Southern Terms?” I’m happy that this brought back a memory from your childhood. Yeah, I think there is some attraction between Will and Miss McClay. As for Will’s status…you’ll just hafta keep reading. Thanks buddy!

Willow~Rosenberg - Thank you for the kind compliments. I think that I can visually see much of this story in my mind because I live in the south. I’m trying very hard to describe the southern US accurately.

GayNow – Car, aww you’re so sweet…sometimes. Is the ‘b’ in subtle silent? LOL. Thank you my lady.

Sam7777 - Will is Willow??? Really? Well, let’s just say that this is the Kitten Board and there is a set of rules I must adhere too. Hehehe. I was going for that awkward tenseness for Will and Tara’s first meeting, you know the kind I’m talking about. I’m glad you though it was there. Thank you.

Artemis - Stop with the predictions! Anyway, I luv me sum spitfire Tara too. Will’s bits may or may not exist and the may or may not be exposed. Anxious to find out? Keep reading. Thank you Chris…for everything.

Foof – You are exactly right in picturing the “Gone with the Wind“ era or shortly there after. Well, I can honestly say that I’m sooooo glad you didn’t wait to start reading this story. Although, you are right in it being a long one ….and probably drawn out.  Thank you so much.

Hermitfish - Cyd, thanks muchly. Strife will be my aim for most of the story, but I’ll try to work in a little “exploration” a little later. 

Irene73 – Can you call me so I can here a girl with a Spanish accent say “I do declare?” LOL. Thank you Irene. I’m happy that you are enjoying my added characters. Abe hiding in his mama’s skirt? Can’t you just see a kid that hasn’t had much contact to the outside world doing that? Please come back and read more.

Meretricious – I’m trying my best to describe each scene to the fullest. I’m glad that it’s easy for you to picture them. Thanks for your help Mary.

Fun in dysfunction – Teddy, thanks for the sweet comments. In due time, in due time, Will and his intentions shall be revealed.

Beanie – I do hope you have moved from your spot. I know that the updates for this story are going to be inconsistent. I’m aiming to write when the visual imagery hits me. Sounds weird I know. I just want to be inspired when I write this, not just giving updates to be giving them. Thank you.

Reallybigpineapple – I shall speak nothing of a bathing scene…yet. Aren’t we all from geek infested roots? LOL Thanks!

Elvis – Your predictions are very good – do you have a crystal ball? The heat, the dreaded southern heat! I think it’s been very hard for me to get in the “mood” to write this story because it is winter time. Hopefully the spring and summer will bring more frequent updates. Thank you Elvis.
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