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UberSmut (Updated 6/04/06) - COMPLETE

Postby FineyMcFine » Tue Feb 14, 2006 4:58 am

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Title: UberSmut
Part: 1
Author: SallyMcFine
Feedback: Yes, as long as it's smutty.
Rating: NC-17
Disclaimer: I don't own the characters, and am not profiting from this story, except for spiritually, of course.
Thanks: Corey Cook from Down the Rabbit-Hole for the title graphic. And to my beta, you sweet thang. Thanks also to all y'all who are reading.
Setting: Contemporary. The characters all frequent a fan-fiction message board called The Warrior, The Bard, and the Bad Wardrobe. This is a sequel to UberCon '05.

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Part 1 - Kickoff

New Thread: UberSmut (hidden)
February 14, 2006 5:00pm

wiccanbard:
hi everybody, happy valentine's day! we want to thank aresisagod for setting up this special new thread for us. all the warriorboard users can see it except for aphrodite.

amazon_hacker: Yeah, thanks also to Cordy for giving us the nod on this project! Okay, folks, here's what's happening in a nutshell - the wonderful and talented aphrodite is turning 21 in a couple of months, and wiccanbard and I decided to organize a little Warrior Board project in honor of her birthday.

wiccanbard: aphrodite has been an author on the board for many years and she's very well known for her smut. many of you have likely read at least one of her stories.

amazon_hacker: Most of you, in fact - her fics have the highest view count of any stories on the board.

wiccanbard: or it could be just the same five people reading the story over and over again.

amazon_hacker: Very possibly. Either way, I think a lot of you will be verrrrrrrrrrrrrrry interested in this project we have conceived. Here's what it is: as a tribute to one of the board's most popular smut authors, we're organizing a compilation of smutty stories. Since aphrodite is turning 21, we'd like to have at least 21 fics, but we'll accept more if there is enough interest.

wiccanbard: here are the guidelines - it's sort of a challenge, actually. All stories must be rated R or NC-17, all must be in an uber setting, and all must feature Aphrodite (the character, not the author) bringing together Xena and Gabrielle in some way.

amazon_hacker: to submit your story, just e-mail your completed draft to ubersmut@gmail.com before our deadline of 9pm on April 14. Make sure it's all beta'd and ready for publication - we'll take care of the bbcode for you. And on April 15, aphrodite's birthday, we'll post the full collection of stories to the Warrior Board!

wiccanbard: this message will self-destruct! aresisagod is going to delete this thread in a couple of days in case aphrodite accesses the board when she's not logged in, so make sure you write the e-mail down and remember, the first rule of UberSmut is that you don't talk about UberSmut (at least not in the public forums)!

amazon_hacker: this gives you about two months to write your stories. Happy UberSmutting!

wiccanbard: i'm already ubersmitten with you.

amazon_hacker: Awwwwwwwwww. We should take this offline; I have a feeling it's about to get NC-17.

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To Be Continued. If anyone would like e-mail some smutty ideas to Willow and Tara, just send an e-mail to ubersmut@gmail.com. They might even write you back![/img]
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Re: UberSmut (Updated 2/14/06)

Postby Candleshoe » Tue Feb 14, 2006 5:21 am

DIBS!!!

I am so excited, Sally! :bounce . I love the idea, and I am really looking forward to seeing how it all pans out. Maybe this is an opportunity for the fic set in an English boarding school that you kinda promised me....
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Re: UberSmut (Updated 2/14/06)

Postby JustSkipIt » Tue Feb 14, 2006 5:45 am

Woo hoo. Just working this morning saw SallyWillyNilly's name on DCP? Gee, how secretive. I always tell you when I'm about to post. But this isn't about me... Awesome. Are you going to really post 21 smutty tales? That's a lot of smut writing but you go girl. Happy to see your story.
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Re: UberSmut (Updated 2/14/06)

Postby spells42 » Tue Feb 14, 2006 6:04 am

Is this a sneaky way to put a challenge on the board? Or are you really going to give us 21 (wow! feel the heat.... and I'm not talking about candles on Anya's b'day cake) smutty W/T stories? I've just had a thought... will they be W&T as Xena and Gabrielle, or maybe W&T reading the smutfics, or even W&T being inspired :-D by the smutfics? So many possibilities.

Loved UberCon.... can't wait for more.

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Re: UberSmut (Updated 2/14/06)

Postby mole » Tue Feb 14, 2006 6:19 am

Oh this will be fun. Thanks for the super Valentine's Day gift.

Had to laugh out loud to see that Aphrodite a/k/a Anya shares a birthday with Uncle Sam's tax day. Made me chuckle.

Really looking forward to this fic, Sally.

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Re: UberSmut (Updated 2/14/06)

Postby GayNow » Tue Feb 14, 2006 7:15 am

Yay for UberSmut!!!!

Very excited about this, Sally. I've been looking forward to a new offering from you. I can't wait to see what you come up with...21 smutty fics, huh? Nice. I'm interested in seeing the kinds of smutty stuff Willow and Tara will write. ;)

Can't wait for more, SillySally!

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Re: UberSmut (Updated 2/14/06)

Postby watty » Tue Feb 14, 2006 9:07 am

Nice start Sallypants. Perhaps in the interest of moderating the thread wiccanbard and amazon_hacker will feel the need to demonstrate to themselves that the smut depicted in the 21 smutty fics is realistic and feasible. Ah, life is so hard, to be a facilitator for a writing group.

amazon_hacker: Most of you, in fact - her fics have the highest view count of any stories on the board.

wiccanbard: or it could be just the same five people reading the story over and over again.

:lmao sometimes I wonder the same thing for some of the post counts we get here.

to submit your story, just e-mail your completed draft to ubersmut@gmail.com before our deadline of 9pm on April 14

how squishy is the deadline? And which timezone is the 9pm? :P

I expect to see all 21 smutty stories posted, alright? You can't dangle that tidbit of delicious delight and not follow through. Can't wait.
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Re: UberSmut (Updated 2/14/06)

Postby justin » Tue Feb 14, 2006 3:04 pm

This is an interesting start to the story. I had been trying to work out what a story called ubersmut would entail, but had never imagined twenty one smutty stories to celebrate Anya's twenty first birthday.

Looking forward to reading the rest of this story.
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Re: UberSmut (Updated 2/14/06)

Postby SithLordWiccan » Tue Feb 14, 2006 6:07 pm

Hmm. I've been looking for a reason to print off and read UberCon. Now I think I got it.

SallyMcFine wrote:To Be Continued. If anyone would like e-mail some smutty ideas to Willow and Tara, just send an e-mail to ubersmut@gmail.com. They might even write you back!


Hmm. I'm kinda curious about just how this works...
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Re: UberSmut (Updated 2/14/06)

Postby taralicious » Tue Feb 14, 2006 8:53 pm

Sally,
21 days of Willow/Tara smut is so much better than those 21 days of James Bond movie festivals that run on cable all the time.
I can't wait to see the variations that Willow and Tara envision for the characters and I have to second the suggestion for an English boarding school setting.
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Re: UberSmut (Updated 2/14/06)

Postby Artemis » Tue Feb 14, 2006 11:48 pm

Ubersmut! :bounce

I'm really looking forward to seeing Willow and Tara read through all the smutty goodness that'll be getting emailed their way - maybe it'll give them a few ideas (as if they need any :blush ). I really liked the back-and-forth between the two of them online too - especially wiccanbard admitting to being 'ubersmitten', that was so cute :x

I'll have to send off an email to Corey, from 'Down The Rabbit Hole' - I think I recall him saying something about having a smutty Xena-Gabrielle uberfic idea...
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Re: UberSmut (Updated 2/14/06)

Postby binky » Wed Feb 15, 2006 4:32 am

Well, um, gosh. This sounds quite promising. Like, the Smutty Lesbian Canterbury Tales. Good luck, Sally, and remember--pacing! (you were aware you were inviting all sorts of lame double-entendres with this setup, weren't you? great teaser, btw)

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Re: UberSmut (Updated 2/14/06)

Postby FineyMcFine » Mon Feb 20, 2006 1:59 pm

Candleshoe

Hey Candleshoe, I'm excited that you're excited! That's a great idea about incorporating the English boarding school fic - so be it! :) Willow and Tara are very collaborative and they want all kinds of input from their readers, so I'll make sure to pass it along to them. :D

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JustSkipIt

Secretive, me? I'm just following Willow and Tara's orders - the first rule of UberSmut is that you don't talk about UberSmut. :) I'll tell ya next time when I'm about to post. Hint: Tuesday mornings at 7am for as long as I can keep up that pace. On the 21 smutty tales, I'm going to incorporate them into the story, but there won't be 21 chapters of Xena and Gabrielle on the Kitten Board, just on the Warrior Board. So stay tuned to see how they work that out. (PS - I'm about 40% done with the first draft of the whole story and even so far I have never written so much smut in my life.)

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spells42

Hey Anne - well, this isn't a challenge per se, although Willow and Tara do want to take smut ideas at ubersmut@gmail.com. There will be 21 smutty fics, but not all in full-length format in this fic, since this is the Kitten Board. But they will peek their heads up here and there throughout the narrative. And you are right about how many possibilities there are - I've considered a lot of them, so I hope I hit the right balance in the story. :)

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mole

Hey Michelle - happy Valentine's Day! Yes, isn't it hilarious that Anya's birthday is on Tax Day? That was intentional, of course - I think that she gets depressed on her birthday every year because of Uncle Sam taking her money - not because she's getting older. In canon she had said that her birthday was the 4th of July but I altered it for the Uberverse because it was too perfect. Glad you're looking forward to it!
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GayNow

Carleen! Woo hoo! Let's say "21-ish" fics, in slightly non-traditional format, eh? Hee hee. I'm glad that you're excited, Car-Car! I am too.
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watson

Thanks wattypants. You have hit upon one of the crucial elements of the moderation of this project for Willow and Tara. Because realistic and feasible is not necessarily always an element one finds in smutty fics. :) And the deadline - well, it's already as jacked-up as Willow can get it since she's going to take care of the bbcode for everyone, and it's 9pm California time of course. (Willow sometimes gets a little self-centered and forgets to say what time zone people not living in California should adhere to...) You'll see some smut, that I can promise. Thanks wattypanties!
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Irene73

Hee hee, Irene, thanks for reading UberCon '05! 21 smutty fics, yeah. Quite an undertaking for our girls - at least they're not writing them all, just, taking delivery of them and um, reviewing them before publication. Verrry interesting, huh? Hee! Thanks for the uber-enthusiastic feedback!

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When thinking about the sequel to UberCon '05 I knew I wanted to do something that still dealt with fan fiction, that wasn't just UberCon '06 (if indeed I get to that point) and something that involved smut, since there wasn't any in the first story. So this idea just sort of popped up (so to speak). Heh.
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Heh, I'm glad to give you a reason, Sithy! Hope you are enjoying it. You're curious about how the girls' ubersmut email address works? They'll write you back if you drop them a line for sure.
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taralicious

Hey Blayne, I'm glad to hear that 21 days of WT is better than 21 days of James Bond. And I hear your second for the English boarding school - it shall be so!

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Artemis

Hee hee! Yes, I have to say that if someone emailed Willow and Tara 21 smutty stories, that it is almost certain to give them ideas, even though they probably don't need any help in that department. Heh. Willow and Tara told me that they heard from Corey and that they wrote him back, by the way. That guy is so creative!
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Hey binky, I wonder what Geoffrey Chaucer would have thought about the lesbian Canterbury Tales. Pacing, heh, yes! I will definitely keep pacing in mind. I wouldn't want this to end too early. Tee hee. Thank you for saying it was a great teaser! :) Also, for the clarification - if anyone is motivated to write a Xena/Gabby smut uberfic, Willow and Tara would love to see it - but I'm not necessarily soliciting them (it's more about if anyone has any ideas or scenarios to pass them along...) So mostly setting, setups, ideas, etc.
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Re: UberSmut (Updated 2/14/06)

Postby FineyMcFine » Tue Feb 21, 2006 4:59 am

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Title: UberSmut
Part: 2
Author: SallyMcFine
Feedback: Yes, as long as it's smutty.
Rating: NC-17
Disclaimer: I don't own the characters, and am not profiting from this story, except for spiritually, of course.
Thanks: Corey Cook from Down the Rabbit-Hole for the title graphic. And to my beta, you sweet thang. Thanks also to all y'all who are reading.
Setting: Contemporary. The characters all frequent a fan-fiction message board called The Warrior, The Bard, and the Bad Wardrobe. This is a sequel to UberCon '05.

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Part 2 - Taking Charge

Willow leaned back in satisfaction as she clicked "Submit" on the last post of their thread. She turned toward Tara, sitting next to her at the computer desk that held her laptop, and grinned. Tara blushed, but grinned back. Encouraged, Willow tried out a lascivious leer she had been practicing in the bathroom mirror.

"You seem pretty confident that things are about to get smutty," Tara said with mock aloofness. "Do you think I'm that easy?"

Willow pretended to think about it. "Well..."

Tara leaned forward and rested her forearms on her thighs. Her upper arms framed her bosom, and she shifted to squeeze her breasts a little closer together. With the low-cut v-necked shirt she was wearing, the net effect was an ample exhibit of cleavage.

"I mean," Tara continued innocently, as Willow's eyes were drawn irresistibly to the display, "I can't have you thinking that I'm easy or else you won't appreciate me."

Willow licked her lips and nodded. "Uh-huh."

"In fact," Tara said, leaning even farther forward, "It makes me think that I've been a little too...accommodating lately." Her breasts strained against the neckline of her shirt, threatening to spill over.

Willow had a glazed look. "Accommodating, yeah..."

"You know," Tara continued, reaching out to grasp either side of the back of Willow's chair and scooting forward to straddle Willow in one smooth motion, her skirt hiking up slightly, "it almost makes me feel like we should take some time off from having sex." Her actions belied her words as she gyrated her hips slightly, rubbing her sex against Willow's thigh.

Her cleavage, less exaggerated but still inviting, was now level with Willow's face. Tara gazed down at her girlfriend, who was still staring at her breasts as if hypnotized.

"Time off..." Willow repeated, not seeming to comprehend.

"The only problem with that plan," Tara said, leaning forward to cup Willow's chin between her breasts, "is that I don't think I could control myself."

Willow closed her eyes as Tara arched her back, rubbing the redhead's cheeks with her cleavage. "Control..."

"That's right," Tara said, tugging the neckline of her shirt down with her left hand and deftly unclasping her bra, freeing her left breast from the confines of her undergarments. The breast seemed to utter a sigh of relief as it was freed from its restraints, or maybe that was Willow, who had opened her eyes again and was now breathing heavily, fixated on the heavenly sight in front of her.

"For example," Tara said, "Right now, I really, really want you to suck on my nipple."

Willow didn't reply, but simply leaned forward and closed her mouth around Tara's pert pink nipple. Tara inhaled sharply as she felt Willow's warm tongue circle her areola, and the answering response as the skin around her nipple quickly pebbled. She again ground her hips against Willow's thigh.

Willow completed the circle of Tara's areola, and closed her mouth and tongue around the nipple itself. She sucked gently, then eased off the pressure, and began to flick her tongue against the erect nub.

Tara grasped the sides of Willow's chair and uttered a low moan as her girlfriend alternated between the sucking and tongue-flicking. She felt a building warm sensation in her sex as wetness dampened her panties. Her skirt had hiked up even further on either side of her hips, so the only thing separating her from Willow's denim-clad thigh was the thin layer of her cotton panties. She thrust her hips forward again; the friction was delightful.

"Don't stop," Tara said, her breath coming faster. "And touch me...between my legs."

Willow complied, not letting Tara's nipple escape her lips as she reached under the girl's skirt with her left hand. She spread her legs slightly to create a space for her hand, and Tara shifted her hips to allow for better access. Willow trailed her fingers along the crotch of her panties, feeling the dampness there.

She stilled the motion of her lips, still enclosing Tara's nipple as she gently tugged at Tara's panties. Tara stood briefly to allow her to slip the panties off one leg, and then she kicked them across the room with her other foot. Resettling herself on Willow's lap, she let out a sigh as Willow's fingers touched her slippery warm folds, exploring all along the outside of her opening. She let out a cry as Willow briefly caressed her clitoris.

"Inside," she said, gripping Willow's chair.

Willow slid two fingers easily into Tara's opening, and at the same time, she resumed suckling her nipple, this time pulling the nub into her mouth and folding her lips over her teeth, gently applying pressure. Tara cried out at the juxtaposition of the two sensations, and braced her legs on the floor on either side of the chair, raising herself up slightly.

"You're so wet, baby," Willow murmured into her mouthful of breast.

"For you," Tara replied, with a slight whimper in her voice.

Willow knew what it was that she wanted, and withdrew her fingers, slick and glistening with Tara's lubrication, to the first knuckle. Tara tensed in anticipation, and Willow thrust her fingers deeply into Tara while she again gently used her lips and teeth to nibble Tara's nipple.

A deep sound of pleasure issued from Tara's throat as Willow settled into a rhythm with her fingers, moving in and out more deeply each time, until Willow was burying the entire length of her fingers into Tara's slick wetness. Copious lubrication coated Willow's fingers and the combination of friction and slickness was sending electrical tingles through Tara's clit every time it brushed against Willow's knuckles.

Tara grasped the hem of her shirt with both hands and removed it in one motion, tossing it carelessly to the side. She presented Willow with her right breast, and needing no instructions, Willow took that nipple into her mouth. Tara bit her lip as the sensations threatened to overwhelm her.

Her breath came in ragged gasps as she felt the pressure build. Willow stilled her thrusts and rested her hand on her thigh, supporting her wrist and allowing Tara to create her own rhythm. Tara tilted her hips back as she rode Willow's hand, seeking more friction on her clit. She hissed as she found the perfect angle, and plunged up and down on Willow's fingers, panting.

Willow felt Tara's flesh begin to contract, squeezing her fingers as she neared her release, and she flexed her fingers inside. This drew a harsh gasp of appreciation from Tara, and Willow did it again. Tara's legs began to tremble, and on her next down stroke, Willow moved the heel of her hand up slightly, giving more direct pressure to Tara's clitoris.

"Oh, God, Willow..." Tara cried. Her legs began to tremble as her orgasm built, and she leaned forward, burying her face into Willow's neck.

Willow's fingers were buried deep in Tara, and she gyrated the heel of her hand against her clit. Tara grasped Willow's chair so hard she feared the wood would break as she thrust her hips a final time and her orgasm finally released. She uttered a cry as the sensation broke over her, feeling her pulsating walls gripping Willow's fingers, and the spasms of her clitoris sending warmth and almost unbearable pleasure through every nerve her body possessed.

Willow held Tara close as the final spasm finally subsided, and Tara relaxed. Her legs would no longer support her and she sagged into Willow's body, trying to catch her breath.

Willow planted little kisses along Tara's neck as she held her. "You are some kind of beautiful, you know that?" she murmured into the girl's neck.

Tara made a sound of deep content. She pushed herself up and gazed into Willow's eyes. She seemed about to speak, but instead leaned forward and covered Willow's lips with her own in a soft kiss.

As the kiss ended, Tara arched her back to stretch it out. "Bed?" she asked.

Willow nodded, and Tara carefully stood up as Willow slid her fingers out. Willow beheld the sight of her girlfriend standing before her, flushed and topless, wearing only a knee-length skirt, looking decidedly rumpled.

"You look good enough to eat," Willow said.

Tara smiled and walked to the bed, falling backward onto it with a sigh of relief as her tired legs gave way. "Give me a few minutes before we try that, okay?" she replied with a laugh.

"Sure," Willow replied as she crawled onto the bed and snuggled up to Tara. She caressed the blonde's tummy in light, random motions that were meant to soothe rather than arouse.

"You really are a take-charge kind of woman," she observed after a few moments. "What's gotten into you?"

Tara smiled. "You," she replied. "Was it too much?"

"No, not at all," Willow said. "It was a huge turn-on."

"Really?" said Tara.

"Yes."

"A huge turn-on, you say?" Tara repeated. "Is there anything I can do for you?" she asked mischievously, running her fingertips lightly along Willow's neck.

Willow shivered with pleasure. "Well, now that you mention it..."
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Re: UberSmut (Updated 2/21/06)

Postby JustSkipIt » Tue Feb 21, 2006 5:15 am

Dibs

ETA: Geez. I mean uh...

Cause you know, it's 6:21 in the morning and that's really rather smutty for this early. But wow, what smut! I mean it's like "smut, all smut, and nothing but the smut." Almost no foreplay. Almost no afterplay.

You did a really great job of communicating what they were doing, not dragging it out too long, but also not making it indeciperable (her third hand was where?). Very smutty. Tee hee.

And ok, I should offer a constructive criticism: I like kissing too. I know, not my smut. But no kissing?

Well done (and you retained your schedule).
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Re: UberSmut (Updated 2/21/06)

Postby mole » Tue Feb 21, 2006 6:31 am

Well, that's ONE way to wake up in the morning. Sheesh. It's just after 6 and...well...dang, now I have to go to work.

Tara sure has Willow's number; flash some cleavage and that enormous brain of hers is reduced to that of a mynah bird, repeating what it hears. Although not incapable of following orders :devil Yep, Take-Charge Tara is very much of the sexy.

To echo what Deb said, great job of allowing us to "see" what's happening. Often smut gets out of hand...er...what I mean to say is difficult to follow. Not so here. You present a very clear, if incredibly hot, picture.

True, the action picks up almost immediately, but I do think there is a bit of foreplay. At least of the mental variety. Tara is very consciously pushing Willow's buttons...um....figuratively speaking.

Okay, before this spirls into something else entirely, I shall close with a big "thank you, Sally" for heating up my morning. It's cold here :-D

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Re: UberSmut (Updated 2/21/06)

Postby Candleshoe » Tue Feb 21, 2006 6:45 am

I am now wearing my lunch, having either dribbled or spit most of it whilst reading this.

I love that I am not doing mental gymnastics, trying to work out what is going on - it's very clear and concise, but very hot!

I also like that they clearly like each other, as well as orgasms, which can often be missing from smutfics. They are so cute together!

Sorry the fb isn't quite as constructive and illuminating as it could be. I am a bit distracted by the need to wipe myself down...(the spilt lunch, remember? You have a very dirty mind... :-D )
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Re: UberSmut (Updated 2/21/06)

Postby tarebear » Tue Feb 21, 2006 7:24 am

hey ms sally! my bad for not leaving feedback before... but i'm definitely excited about this story... not just because of the 21 promised smuts but just because you have a new story for us! yey to that! and i seem to remember a tarabladder and willowcolon story in the making too that you mentioned in a different thread (sorry, i just had to put that in hehe)

anyways, i agree with what mole said, tara definitely has willow's number... a flash of cleavage and bam! willow is under her spell hehe... just curious though, how long has time passed since the end of ubercon to ubersmut? less than a year max, right?... well of course duh! they are finally at that level where they're really sexually in-tune with each other and it seems shy tara has left the building and take-charge tara is in residence and willow is definitely not complaining... heck, nobody would :lol

i'm glad i have a story from you to look forward to again... keep up the great work! fantastic start by the way... you definitely got everyone stirred up with the promise of 21 smutty fics... i've never been more glad of anya's birthday :lol
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Re: UberSmut (Updated 2/21/06)

Postby kisstheviolets » Tue Feb 21, 2006 7:25 am

dear lord, ms. mcfine.

i guess i should have known that anything called "ubersmut" would be just that! what delightful smutty goodness in the morning. while i'm a fan of kissage, like justskipit, sometimes even in real life you just get right to it with little fanfare and the scenario tara was playing at was one such example of that (sex whilst driving or in public may be others...). i think it takes a lot of love and trust to have that kind of ability to tell someone exactly what you want (if that's not your normal personality, that is) and i couldn't imagine w & t being any other way.

i didn't read "ubercon" (not one for xena) but maybe i should get on that too since i want to be your new groupie.

anywho... i just got out of the shower and think i might need another, colder, one now!! maybe "ubersmut" will be the solution to the energy woes of the northeast (or at least my heating bill): cold showers for everyone!

sally mcsmut, you rock.

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Re: UberSmut (Updated 2/21/06)

Postby GayNow » Tue Feb 21, 2006 7:43 am

kisstheviolets wrote:i didn't read "ubercon" (not one for xena) but maybe i should get on that too since i want to be your new groupie.


Brandy, you really do need to read it. It's really less about Xena and Gabby and all about Willow and Tara. Honest!

Sally, great stuff. I'll be back for more fulfilling feedback later.

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Re: UberSmut (Updated 2/21/06)

Postby watty » Tue Feb 21, 2006 8:53 am

Car wrote:Brandy, you really do need to read it. It's really less about Xena and Gabby and all about Willow and Tara. Honest!

Word. This non Xena person read UCon and loved it, the Xena stuff is all in the background, just substitute our favorite couple and you'll be fine.

And Car ... "fulfilling"? what needs are Sally "fulfilling" for you? [/gooberkork moment]

Sallypants, smut smut smut!!!!! You're definitely on track for the 38k of smut that I asked for. Heehee.

"Right now, I really, really want you to suck on my nipple."

TakeCharge!Tara is one big turn-on, I am envious of Willow, she's one lucky amazon hacker. I can feel the open-ness and lack of inhibitions that has developed between them, it can't be that long after UCon? I guess when you're meant for each other, you're meant for each other. Using a word that you taught me, the smut was HAWT!!!
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Re: UberSmut (Updated 2/21/06)

Postby kisstheviolets » Tue Feb 21, 2006 10:18 am

I have no choice but to take the advice of two of the KBs most esteemed residents. I'm heading over to UberCon now and hoping Ms. McFine will forgive my previous transgression :-)
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Re: UberSmut (Updated 2/14/06)

Postby SithLordWiccan » Tue Feb 21, 2006 10:25 am

SallyMcFine wrote:You're curious about how the girls' ubersmut email address works? They'll write you back if you drop them a line for sure.


Hm. I might have to do that.

SallyMcFine wrote:Also, for the clarification - if anyone is motivated to write a Xena/Gabby smut uberfic, Willow and Tara would love to see it - but I'm not necessarily soliciting them (it's more about if anyone has any ideas or scenarios to pass them along...) So mostly setting, setups, ideas, etc.


Hmm...I do have some smutty ideas...
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Re: UberSmut (Updated 2/21/06)

Postby Boschi » Tue Feb 21, 2006 10:48 am

:blush

That was close to the best procrastination ever... and I procrastinate a lot.

And it's power only continues: I'm not sure I'm actually capable of writing grant proposal stuff right now.

Wow. Thanks.

Was happy to see the return of wiccanbard and crew - good folk, fun settings.

Regards,

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Re: UberSmut (Updated 2/21/06)

Postby Trom DeGrey » Tue Feb 21, 2006 2:39 pm

Read UberCon over on Chris' site. My apologies for not leaving feedback here. I enjoyed the story and thought it was a lot of fun. 21 smutty stories, eh? Well, you're certainly off to a screaming hot start! Looking forward to more!
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Re: UberSmut (Updated 2/21/06)

Postby WillowRulez » Tue Feb 21, 2006 4:25 pm

Uhm... *drools* :blush
Welcome back! I was waiting for the sequel. And what a sequel it is! They're really confident now huh? :-D You won't hear me complaining! Hope we're gonna meet the others again soon too... doesn't have to be too soon (the meeting, not the next update :x ).
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Re: UberSmut (Updated 2/21/06)

Postby Emms » Tue Feb 21, 2006 10:38 pm

Sally, this is soooo awesome! :-D

I'll be back with a more detailed feedback in the morning...'cos my brain is a little fuzzled tonight...

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Re: UberSmut (Updated 2/21/06)

Postby dorksrcool » Tue Feb 21, 2006 11:25 pm

Everyone else is much more eloquent than me....that was freakin' unbelievable! Thank you! I can say with confidence that that was some of the best "smut" I've ever read. Wow. :bow

ETA: I was a slightly intoxicated last night when I commented on this fic so I just wanted to add :shock :drool :thud. And sorry for my potty mouth. :blush
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Re: UberSmut (Updated 2/21/06)

Postby Guppy » Tue Feb 21, 2006 11:43 pm

:applause hot smut! Now I have to run off and read UberCon. I definately feel that I'm missing some awesome reading over there. Can't wait for updates on this story. Awesome awesome awesome!
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Re: UberSmut (Updated 2/21/06)

Postby Tues » Thu Feb 23, 2006 11:31 am

Holy heck!

I know I was all droopy at the end of UberCon '05, but not so much anymore!

So no drooping - just perkiness! Think perky - like Willow's boobs. (Did I just say that out loud?)


21 one of these really? I may not survive it all, but what a way to go.

Well I 'lurved' UberCon... but I'm feeling something distinctly different about UberSmut. Overheated?

Just to echo everyone else's sentiments in my own wordless brain-freeze. PRRRRRR!!!!
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