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Short Story: The Taste of Copper

Postby Miss Elly » Sun Dec 30, 2007 6:54 pm

Title: The Taste of Copper

Author: Chachumera

Disclaimers: I don't own Willow or Tara, I'm just borrowing them.

Rating: PG-13 - R

Feedback: Feed me!!

Summary: Vamp-Tara tells you about the time she got sired.


Notes: For those of you who are reading my other fic -if there is anyone- I'm still writing that. What happened with it was that my document somehow got erased from my computer so I what I wrote on Chapter Six got erased, so I'm re-writing that.


Other notes: I know the title sucks, I rushed on it. Also, I love all the fics where either Willow or Tara are vampires so I wanted to try my own little thing. I hope it turned out okay. :grin




The taste of copper


I remember the night that I got sired so clearly as if it were yesterday. I remember every little detail about it. The cold crisp air, the distant voices of wandering people, I remember all of it so clearly.



Of course, it’s not that I didn’t see it coming. I’d known all those times I’ve stayed out late that I’ve been followed. I could always feel her presence, her aura, her essence was so strong, and it was almost tangible. But I wasn’t afraid. I knew that if I ever died, there was nothing for me to loose. My mother had died when I was seventeen; she was the only person that I was ever close to. The rest of my family, Dad, Donny, Cousin Beth- I bet they didn’t even notice that I left them. They’re too caught up in themselves to notice anything else around them.



The night that I got sired was the night that I finally called out whoever I felt following me for so long. I just walked out of the magic box and was making my way towards the campus when I felt her again. I walked into a dark, empty alley where no one could see and called out.



“I know you’ve been following me. You can come out now. There’s no point in hiding.” I said while looking right and left hoping to see her. Even after feeling her all those nights, I’ve never actually seen her.



I heard her giggle and I turned to the noise, but she wasn’t there. Then I felt her behind me, and I turned around again. That was the first time I ever saw her. Before it was just her shadow or short glances. When I saw her, I thought ‘I’ve never seen anything more beautiful.’



“You have to be careful in these dark alleys. You never know who you might find in them.” She said.



I didn’t answer. Instead I just watched her slowly circling me like a lion stalking it prey, getting ready to attack. I knew that, that’s what she was going to do to me soon. Attack. But I wasn’t afraid, she knew it too, and liked it.


“You’re not running away. That’s no fun.” She stopped her circling and started to move toward me. She grinned when I still didn’t move.



‘She’s testing me.’



Her hand rested on my cheek, and when I still didn’t flinch she pouted. “Still not running… maybe…” She paused and brushed the hair in my face away. I closed my eyes and exhaled deeply. “Wanna be bad?” I felt her breath on my neck. “ I could let you live forever… I could make you stronger then ever. You’ll by my side. We could be together forever… I’ll take care of you…”



“Yes.” I managed to breath out.



I gasped softly when I felt her tongue slowly sliding up my neck. “I know you’re all alone. I see it. You stay in your room all night, and never have any fun at all.” Her lips trailed over my jaw line. “I could change that.” And finally her lips covered mine.



She pushed me up against a wall in the alley and kissed me hard, almost bruising my lips. I moaned and pulled myself away from her. “What’s your name?”



“Willow… And you're Tara.” Our tongues clashed together. I’d never felt anything like it before. I was beyond turned on and I felt my hips slowly rocking against hers. When I did, her mouth left mine I went back to my jaw and down to my neck.



Willow sucked on my neck making a mark as if branding me as her own. Then it happened. Her hips moved faster and harder against mine while her teeth penetrated my neck. She sucked all of me into her, tasting me. Right before I felt as if I might pass out, she stopped.



Willow quickly pulled away from my neck and ran her finger along her tongue, drawing blood. She kissed me hard again thrusting her tongue in my mouth. I could feel the coppery taste of her blood and drank all I could gather up in my mouth.



Slowly all my thoughts were fading. I couldn’t feel my legs my arms, anything. Soon I fell unconscious on the ground, lying in Willow’s cold, dead, soft, comforting arms. I knew the next time that I would wake up, I would fully, and completely be hers, and only hers.

THE END

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Re: Short Story: The Taste of Copper

Postby mezz » Sun Dec 30, 2007 8:26 pm

Wow. Interesting. Well written. Is there a chance for part two?? :kgeek
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Re: Short Story: The Taste of Copper

Postby jay/wt4evr » Mon Dec 31, 2007 1:46 am

wow and wow
I second mezz part two? :pray
god you made me go all :drool
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Re: Short Story: The Taste of Copper

Postby Willowtree252 » Mon Dec 31, 2007 6:51 am

:thud :thud :thud :thud :thud I think you broke me missy
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Re: Short Story: The Taste of Copper

Postby Psy » Mon Dec 31, 2007 8:17 am

Excellent. I love Vamp Tara. There are't enough Vamp Tara fics out there. Why aren't that many Vamp Tara fics out there?!

Lol.

Yes, well written. Think you captured Vamp Will perfectly. In my most humble opinion. :)

Part two would be lovely. :smash
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Re: Short Story: The Taste of Copper

Postby Miss Elly » Mon Dec 31, 2007 9:03 pm

mezz wrote:Wow. Interesting. Well written. Is there a chance for part two??

Thanks. I'm glad you find it interesting.

jay/wt4evr wrote:wow and wow
I second mezz part two?:pray
god you made me go all


Wow. I'm, uh... glad I had such an effect on you.

Dianneswillowtree wrote:I think you broke me missy


Ah. Well that's not good! I didn't really think this would be 'break' worthy, but I'm glad you think so.

Psy wrote:Excellent. I love Vamp Tara. There are't enough Vamp Tara fics out there. Why aren't that many Vamp Tara fics out there?!

Lol.

Yes, well written. Think you captured Vamp Will perfectly. In my most humble opinion. derr

Part two would be lovely.


Yeah. I wish there were more Vamp Tara fics too. There are Vamp Willow fics, but not Vamp Tara.
Thanks! I tried to get her as right as I could cause I'm not very good with character capturing.


So I was thinking about a second one, since a good majority of you Kittens asked, and I might do it. I'm not sure I'll have time though, because I still have The White Room to do, and there's always the pesky schoolwork, so I won't promise anything. I did enjoy writing this, and I might make like a mini series thing of short stories on Vamp Willow/Tara- if I find time.

Thanks for the feedback. Any kind is much appreciated
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