Short poetry - 8/07 Depths

jay/wt4evr · **Posted:** Sun Dec 09, 2007 3:58 pm

ok I know I've still Massages going on, but I've had this one buzzin' in my head...it would be Willow's during s6 without Tara
edited much later everything on this thread is about Willow and Tara even though I didn't write it everywhere

I had my chance
I wasted it
But my love still lingers in my heart
I close my eyes
And I see you
My heartbeat
Sounds like your name
With simplicity I love you
I realized it
When I tried to tell you
Maybe tonight
I won't be the only one who'll dream of you
And maybe I'll wake
Screaming your name

hope you liked ;-)

SJ · **Posted:** Mon Dec 10, 2007 2:37 am

Great poem!

sweet satin lover · **Posted:** Tue Dec 11, 2007 10:38 am

Lovely poem welldone!

jay/wt4evr · **Posted:** Tue Dec 11, 2007 1:29 pm

Thank you gals!
you know, at first it wasn't for this use, it was me thinking that during every moment of my life...who knew it would be "Willow's" too? :blush

jay/wt4evr · **Posted:** Thu Dec 13, 2007 6:26 am

Hey another lil' poetry (if you could call it so) always Willow during her Tara-less time sadness much

Maybe you don't know
But you've been the only one
Maybe you don't care
But I live just for you
Deep in my soul I can feel you
Deep in my heart I can hear you
Listen carefully
And you can hear me
I am still screaming your name
Lost in my own world of you
I know we can't ever be
But I've fallen in love with you
I am still hitting on you
My heart has broken for you
But honestly I just love you
Maybe you don't know
But you take my breathe away
Maybe you don't care
But I've born to be yours
Inside my mind
You are just mine
But inside my heart
I want you to be free
Look around slowly
And you can see me
Saying goodbye

SJ · **Posted:** Fri Dec 14, 2007 6:40 am

Nice rhythm to your writing,great poem.

sweet satin lover · **Posted:** Fri Dec 14, 2007 6:51 am

Wow that poem was deep thanks for sharing welldone I loved it

jay/wt4evr · **Posted:** Fri Dec 14, 2007 12:08 pm

Thank you!!!

Uhm...much with the sadness in this month....and rhymes!

Do you believe in love?
That shooting sound
Of the heartbeat
I do believe in love
That wide wound
Of pleasure in the heart
Can't you feel my pain growing?
I sure feel my soul soaring
Will you be my lover?
'cause I will love you forever
Say you will be mine
And I won't waste time
I will give you every bit of me
And I know it will last forever
Call my name in the dark
And it will wake me with a spark
I would love you all night long
But I can't do it 'cause it wrong
You belong with you life
I say your name ever so softly
But once again it's just hopeless

stupid much I know, and I didn't even found the right rhyme for last verse....

anyway love you all

SJ · **Posted:** Sat Dec 15, 2007 3:12 am

Powerful words,great poem.

jay/wt4evr · **Posted:** Sun Dec 16, 2007 10:41 am

thank you again, here's another one!

Forever I'll be by your side
Forever you'll be in my heart
But forever
I'll be missing you
'cos you're the one
The only one who
Can brighten my days
The only one who
Can give sense to my life
And everything I did
It was just for you
To be proud of me
And every mistake I did
I regret with all myself
'cos while perfection doesn't exist
Fault is all over me
Every wound on my body
Barely hurts me
And every pain in my life
I barely care
While I have this bitter hole
To replace my heart
'cos you're the one
The only one
I've ever loved deeply
The only one
I will love forever
And no one of my tears
Soaked my dry soul
And no one of my screams
Has been heard
I can only hear my heart beating
Do you?
It's beating for you

Ok dumb ending but hey!

sweet satin lover · **Posted:** Sun Dec 16, 2007 3:28 pm

Wow that is a great poem thanks for sharing!

SJ · **Posted:** Mon Dec 17, 2007 6:43 am

Great poetry!

jay/wt4evr · **Posted:** Mon Dec 17, 2007 6:47 am

why thank you both, I'm glad you like them!!!

SJ · **Posted:** Thu Dec 20, 2007 2:49 am

Happy Christmas and New Year!

jay/wt4evr · **Posted:** Mon Dec 24, 2007 3:55 pm

Merry xmas and happy new year to you too!

here's another one hope you like it
but it's thin and small and litttle!!

When she's not here
My eyes ache her sight
When she's here
My body aches her touch
When she touches me
My heart aches hers

And in between all this madness
I see her smile
I manage to smile her back
And now I know
That next time
I will ache her love

:yikes

SJ · **Posted:** Tue Dec 25, 2007 2:03 am

Lovely poem!

sweet satin lover · **Posted:** Wed Dec 26, 2007 6:55 am

That is great!

jay/wt4evr · **Posted:** Wed Dec 26, 2007 3:17 pm

thank you!!! how many do I have to post so you tell me your name?!

that's more a statement, but, it means a lot to me

Once it seemed that even the clouds stopped to look at you

sweet satin lover · **Posted:** Fri Dec 28, 2007 7:48 am

Wow a powerful statement very nice indeed.

jay/wt4evr · **Posted:** Fri Dec 28, 2007 11:41 am

thank it's good to know that I didn't just make a compete fool outta myself!

here's a...well a reflection, and it would be Willow without Tara

Here I am, in a bleak station to think bleak thoughts.
I must say that thinking of who I was before meeting you, it clutches my heart.
This same heart that now beats strong in my chest, this same heart that three years ago beated just for you.
And it still beats for you. Non-stopping.
Even though sometimes I wish that it just stopped beating,
that it would let me a truce from that constant thumping that reminds me of you.
Because my heart, when it thumps, it sings.
Always the same thing.
Tara.
Then I always have this name on my mind.
And every time I think of you for me it's living another life.
Begin everything all over again.
Stupid mistakes that brought me to live the worst time of my life.
It has been a period from which I was changed,
I was no more the happy and carefree girl I was once.
I become a mature woman who, behind her happiness hides all her shyness showed when she hid her feelings,
who by her talkativeness wants to make up for all the things that she didn't say.
I need love. Not the fraternal, motherly, fatherly love.
Passional love, the one that overwhelms, the one that destroys.
Because I won't be destroyed.
My life begins and ends in our Love.
The one that overwhelms, the one that destroys.
The one that destroyed me.

:yikes

SJ · **Posted:** Sat Dec 29, 2007 2:34 am

Great writing.

jay/wt4evr · **Posted:** Sat Dec 29, 2007 2:38 am

Thank you, I'm really glad you like it

sweet satin lover · **Posted:** Sun Dec 30, 2007 5:48 pm

Wow Jay I really loved that new poem lots of things going on there welldone it was excellent!

jay/wt4evr · **Posted:** Wed Jan 02, 2008 10:52 am

Thank!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! :party

here you go, vixen!

It has even a title!!!

FEVER

I hold myself tight in my arms
Wishing they were yours
I miss the warmth of your body
I miss the thumping of your heart
So I wander and I'm so lost
My body is so cold
that even the worst storm
burns me
I've got fever
Chills of love on my back
Cold sweat during the night without you
I shiver and cry
Heat I won't feel ever again
but I always try to find it
But I know it's useless
Because you're no longer with me

:yikes

sweet satin lover · **Posted:** Wed Jan 02, 2008 11:14 am

Awww a very sad but powerful poem welldone

SJ · **Posted:** Fri Jan 04, 2008 2:16 am

Great poem.

jay/wt4evr · **Posted:** Fri Jan 04, 2008 8:16 am

thank you gals you're wonderful!!!

this one is kinda weird, it's supposed to be a...speech I think, between Willow and Tara always during their time apart
the first is Willow, the second Tara (duh) and so on

I look at the moonlight mirrored in your eyes
And I see there is also the reflection of the stars

No, they're unshed tears
They're the ones I didn't cried looking at the ceiling
Thinking of you

My Love
You know what I want to say
My words will reach you across the world
To tell you a tale of endless love

I believe we were forever
But now forever doesn't last

ok kinda dumb.... :yikes

sweet satin lover · **Posted:** Fri Jan 04, 2008 9:39 am

It was great! No way not dumb at all it was really good

SJ · **Posted:** Sun Jan 06, 2008 3:57 am

Great writing.

jay/wt4evr · **Posted:** Sun Jan 06, 2008 4:26 am

awww thank gals you got me all :aww

and

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